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From JOler on September 03, 2011
Hmmm ... So Soi Fon and Tosen had a fling just befor he left with Aisen ... Wonder if the kid was even born before he left. I'm thinking she didn't really have anyone after him and that Szayel really is the dad but she hates the fact that the child's father would once again be someone she ends up considering an enemy ... and she already has a history of pregnancy difficulties ~ wonder if Akon will ask her to wait for him in a designated area and then 'lock her in until she calms down' ... just for her own safety and health concerns due to her history with pregnancies. He might even have sedatives that are preapproved by Unohanna slipped into her food and water (and possibly vented in with the air) to help keep her calm and prevent potential injury to the child due to escape attempts or hostile actions. I wonder if Szayel would at least appear concerned if she started having complications and he knew she was being kept under sedation all the time. It would be great to see her a few months into her pregnancy and having some complications that left her weak and distraught then he visits her for a few minutes (as he has made a habit of doing with each positive test candidate) and she finally breaks down and confesses that she couldn't accept that both times she got pregnant it was by a person she thought of as an enemy before the child could be born ... and he could hold and comfort her in some way ~ and honestly be stunned that she managed to conceive though he may feel that the complications are because her body is rejecting the baby due to his DNA. It would give them both a chance to show a softer and more vulnerable side ...

I'm all for Akon being promoted because Mayuri fails to return, he might have a few changes in how things are handled in that case. In all honesty if they didn't want contaminated test results the females would have been confined immediately after their time with Szayel ... and permitted several visits with him for a month or two ... then kept until the tests confirmed no chance of pregnancy a couple months later ... so confined a minimum of four or five months to ensure he is the only male 'contributor' and the female receptive timing was not missed (only 24 to 36 hours per month I believe).

I'm wondering about Isane's sister since she was the first to test positive and she was not confined right away ... how will she take this change of events? I'm also keeping my fingers crossed for Rangeku (and that all her other male companions have been platonic and greatly exaggerated due to the speculation of others and the false boasting of some of the males).
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From JOler on August 25, 2011
Poor Szayel ... I hope that Unohanna and Isane are able to give him a thorough exam and treat him so he can heal properly. I'd pretty much bet that Mayuri has been modifying him just so he keeps getting sicker and weaker. I'm sure Akon isn't totally clueless in regard to all the experiments that have taken place. I don't fully trust Akon but can hope that he has enough of a humanitarian side and a concience that he will allow the others to repair Szayel as much as possible (perhaps feigning concern and interest in Nemu's progress and morning sickness as well as the progress of any other positive candidates ~ so far we know of at least one other and there are two we haven't seen report to get checked for positive or negative results ... Round 1 Soi Fon ... And round two Rangeku even though it might be too early for her *still keeping my fingers crossed*). Of course with the timing and all I wonder if Szayel and Nemu are having sympathetic and subconsciously telempathic morning sickness (he feels sick so she feels sick and vice versa).

As for Mayuri ... It would be just awful if he was captured by a new crop of extra strong vasto lorde who have become the next generation of espada ... And it would be even worse if Szayel's scientific replacement got hold of him and started doing experiments on him ... Oh how he'd loathe that irony. Of course it would serve him right to end up like that ... But without the breeding experiment in his case.

Now would be a wonderful time for a general walk through of the council ... Just to let them get an overview of how things are progressing. Perhaps a few of the more benevolent ones can discover how horrendously Mayuri has been experimenting on his prisoner. I wonder how Akon would alter things if Mayuri was forced to give up his captaincy due to gross mistreatment and mishandling of prisoners (his treatment of Szayel) and personnel (his treatment of Nemu) ... Among other issues.

Still keeping my fingers crossed that Szayel will find he has a harem of fangirls ~ several of whom carry his offspring ~ and that Rangeku is one of them (her hair style in his lovely shade of pink and with her eyes but framed with his glasses ... Her figure eventually but with his slightly evil and mischievous twinkle in her eye...)

Sorry for the late review ... Was on the road heading back to college for Fall semester.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on August 17, 2011
hurray, nemu & szay tattled on the prick & prick jr. so happy to read this chap. also glad unohana was sly & got mayuri out of picture for a few days. i normally like akon, but here, i'm hoping nemu or isane (who i've shipped w/akon before) will give him a hard kick to the nuts. he deserves it. hoping he'll come back to the good side soon, but if not, some sort of justice must come to him before story's end. maybe the baby will grow up enough to terrorize him (but akon won't be able to do anything back b/c its just a kid)... poor szay is always getting tortured! karma is a bitch & all, so some of it is likely justified for his own misdeeds, but he's a good guy now. can he & nemu get some loving in while mayuri is away? hope so. update soon.
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From JOler on August 16, 2011
Hmmm ... Sounds like Szayel and Nemu both need protecting from Mayuri in one form or another. I'm sure Unohana will do her best, but knowing the members of squad 12 I'm sure they will expect Mayuri to appoint Akon or some other squad 12 member to be in charge while he is gone. It would be soooooo nice if that 0.001% chance of serious (near fatal) injury happened to Mayuri on this mission ... making him a candidate for squad 4 treatment. I know Unohanna wouldn't overtly do anything to punish him for his treatment of his test subjects but .... I'm sure she will be less inclined to notice Isane or any other members being less than careful in their treatment of him ... she might even note that his slow recovery would require him to extend his stay (confined to bed/room ... in full traction and body cast perhaps) indefinitely ~ or at least until Szayel can be fully healed (though a damper on his abilities would be kept in place for safety reasons) and Nemu could get further along past the critical stages (as well as any other pregnant members). Oh well, that's wishful thinking.

I wonder if the mating experiments will continue since there are more volunteers and we still don't know if Soi Fon or Rangeku are pregnant (still keeping my fingers crossed and hoping that he was Rangeku's actual first as well as the daddy of a baby by her ... Szayel sooooo deserves a loving harem and a chance to be an adoring daddy).

I'm sure Unohana will allow for more couple time in Mayuri's absence.

Glad you could post so soon.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on August 15, 2011
like story so far. w/this chap, given how sharp cap unohana has been about what's been happening & how mayuri operates, i'm so surprised at her behavior in this chap. she's written as walking away from a clearly volatile situation, not even checking on nemu; she's gotta know mayuri would easily at a minimum physically torture/damage szayzel & maybe even kill him, while restricting nemu even more than he had already. yet in scene she's just gonna walk away. unless she's plotting & that will be revealed later, it seems ooc for story so far. even if there's manipulation or active plotting underlying this 'tactical retreat' of sorts, the fact szayzel may not survive night which in turn would severely disturb nemu, in turn putting this so-important pregnancy at risk seems extremely ill-advised for a captain of her keen intelligence.

you seemed to knock this chap in a.n. but it didn't read badly. the rift between akon & nemu & szay deflecting mayuri's wrath onto him on purpose along w/the last part which i found ooc are meaningful scenes for the story being told. its an entertaining story so far & i look forward to its continuation.
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From JOler on August 07, 2011
Squeeeeeeee ... Glomp ... A new chappie is here ... Sounds like Nemu has a serious insecurity complex and I'm still hoping that Rangeku's reputation is due to speculative rumors and not fact. Hopefully Szayel doesn't over react (same can be said for Mayuri ... Though it might help with relieving him of his command at a later date if desired). Hopefully Isane doesn't get in trouble ~ figure it is kind of too late to make that wish in regard to Nemu. Still hope Szayel gets to be Rangeku's first and she gives him an adorable little cherub too. Still say Szayel deserves to have an adoring harem firmly on his side since he is so often mistreated and neglected.

Seeing the baby (babies) chaps will be great ... But watching the psychological development of the adults in this situation is great too ... Kind of want Szayel to be Rangeku's first so that a positive pregnancy result would catch him completely off guard ~ especially if everyone else insists that anyone could be the father of HER kid (until he explains that she was a virgin when she was with him for the experiment and he was her first ~ that would get several gasps and raised eyebrows at the very least ).

Glomp ~ thanks for the new chapter ~ hope there's another one soon.
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From JOler on August 05, 2011
Whimper whimper whiiiiiiiiine .... Did this lovely ficcie get forgotten? The chat between Szayel and Unohanna was wonderful. Hope all is well and guess you are on break.

Still say a reluctant and flabbergasted Szayel deserves a devoted and adoring harem ... Even if he doesn't intend or plan to acquire one ... and I still say Rangeku deserves to be totally misunderstood because everyone is taking her at face value and making unsubstantiated rumors and speculations.

Hugs and hope to see an update soon.
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From JOler on July 23, 2011
Whimper ... Trying to be patient ... Sooo wanna see the thoughts of all concerned ... And find out who round two contestant number two is gonna be.
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From JOler on July 11, 2011
Hmmm ... Sounds like Unohana might get a little more involved than she originally intended. I so hope that Szayel is getting more emotionally invested than he realizes since the emersion into his own emotions is taking place so slowly. I'd still love to see poor neglected Szayel get a loving harem who all adore him (and whom he adores in return).

Seeing how he reacts to several expectant potentials would be nice ... I'm not fond of miscarriage but I do wonder how he'd react to one of the women losing the baby (nominate Soi Fon who could have a radical emotional reaction to both the pregnancy and the later loss ...) Would Szayel feel pain at the loss? Would he attempt to comfort the mother who miscarried (I.e. Be gentle and caring etc.). Would any of the shinigami (male or female view him differently in such a case?) How might the mom's feelings change in regard to him? If he saw various people 'looking down on or insulting' the pregnant women and he stood up for them in their 'delicate' condition that was brought about because of the experiment and was a plausible outcome that he was in denial of until several pregnancies resulted ... How would everyone (participants and non-participants) view his reactions?

If he's being the whispered 'talk of the town' I'm wondering if any of the shinigami males are jealous or at least somewhat envious. ... Also wondering how the next captains meeting will go. Will any of the squads change their opinion on the experiment ... Be more supportive since a second pregnancy (or more) have occured.
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From JOler on July 08, 2011
Hope classes are going well and you can get back to the story soon.

Sounds like Szayel and Rangeku might have developed somewhat of an interest in each other; even if it is hidden in both of their pasts and may be causing them to be in denial. I do feel as though they sort of need each other emotionally and it wouldn't take much to convince either to make just a little more room inside for each other.

Though it wasn't fully clear ... I do hope they actually DID go through with it to completion as Sayel has called it in the past ... Seeing a green-eyed little cherub with pinkish Rangeku like hair would be soooo cute. I'm still hoping that Rangeku was somewhat inexperienced before being with him ... and after his musing about how far she and Gin had gotten, he found out he himself had gotten further (a psychological one-up-manship for him to log ... and a reason for her to be somewhat more attached to him as well if he was her actual 'first time'). From his reaction to her I seriously doubt he'd push her away and might be trying to deny and hide his caring for her after her revelations during their warm-up chat. Please let her get pregnant too ... Hmmm maybe Soi Fon as well so we can see how he'd react to his theories being wrong ... and how he'd react if Soi Fon wasn't able to carry to term for one reason or another ... Kinda wonder how Soi Fon would react too. (would so want Rangeku to carry to term).

I'm not sure who is helping Rangeku on the outside ... But if it's her Captain I know in canon he isn't interested in any physical activities with her so ...

On the positive side it would give Nemu a companion instead of being in solitary confinement most of the time ... I know it might be a bit out there but it would be nice to see Szayel with his own little loving harem since he so often gets neglected ... It would be like he's making up for lost time in that area ... besides he does strike me as having the potential of being a (somewhat psycho) decent parent ... Given Mayuri and Nemu's family history I'd say Szayel would at least be a better parent than Mayuri ... I really can't see Szayel doing experiments on any of his mates (except possibly sexual experimentation), or using his own kids as test subjects (or letting Mayuri do so).

Still wonder if any of the 'test subjects' will request more rounds with him ... for physical OR emotional reasons ...

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From JOler on June 28, 2011
Hmmm ... Sounds like Szayel had a little flame in his heart for Miss Tia Haribel ... Of course that's just a guess. I can't speak for everyone but ... I, personally, would love to hear both their thoughts on what had just taken place.

I'm wondering if they stopped short or not, and if she compared his 'skills' to one or more from her past ... or if he was, to most peoples surprise, her first REAL time going all the way (if it went that far). I'm kinda hoping for him to have been shocked to find that he was her first, she had been in love with Gin but it had been platonic because she was the only one Gin had confided his little secret to (he was gay and at the time his own love was unrequited ... ).

I'd love to see him almost in shock if he really was her first and the timing was right for her to get pregnant ... he'd know he was almost definitely the daddy (which would blow his own theories out of the water) ... The only other options he could see would be someone else attacking her (hadn't happens before so not likely now) or the friend who's been trying to help her get over Gin (but he's been unsuccessful too ... and may have kept it completely platonic ... especially if that friend is Cpt Hitsugya).

He knew she was hiding a lot from him, at least at first. It would be great if they were able to bond emotionally (all three of them) and help each other heal in all ways. It does sound like they both got seriously rocked on an emotional level and need time to deal with it, but Szayel probably won't get the time he really needs for a little while since 'contestant number two' will soon 'come on down' ...

I can easily see Rangeku not opening up very much beyond the fact that seeing him reminded her of Gin's last minute sacrifice of himself to save her (Cpt Unohana would probably accept that as a valid excuse for Rangeku's emotional state). Of course she may open up more to her friend or just pull away a bit and try to work through it all herself for a bit because any new feelings she may have developed for Szayel and his 'surprisingly caring' words and actions plus the reminder that he was near Gin after Gin left with Aisen ... It all could have left her lost in a confusing and somewhat distressing maze of feelings. Still, it would be nice to see her and Nemu together to give each other mutual support ... and Szayel's surprise in himself at actually having enough room and love in his 'non-existent' heart for both of them (and his kids).

I still don't see Nemu as a mom type but Rangeku might be ... And I'm pretty sure any kids Szayel has will have him wrapped around their little fingers.

I'm loving this story ... and because he's so often neglected, Szayel deserves an adoring harem even if he didn't have any intention of that at the start. (Could you imagine half or more of the fighting class women in Soul Society being on the 'Save Szayel From The Twelvth and Death' bandwagon if Mayuri was overheard making that threat again? Lol ... Everyone would be shocked ~ including Szayel. His only stunned answer being ~ all I really did was listen ...). And seeing him stunned, shocked, and surprised is always kind of fun. Of course seeing him sort of sweet and caring is nice too. (I'm still holding out a bit of hope that he was Rangeku's first and only and results in a pretty little bun in her oven ... much to his dismay).

Wonder what Mayuri has decided in regard to the new pregnancies ... Exactly where the moms-to-be will be lodging and visitation rights during pregnancy). Also Unohana's findings of each pregnancy ... (want Nemu and, if possible, Rangeku to carry successfully to term but if a third gets pregnant by him I wonder how he would deal with a mid-term miscarriage ~ and if he'd try to help the mother deal with her own emotional loss ... He seems like he might be there for her emotionally if she was having his kid ... At least to some degree ~ can't see Mayuri being overly caring or supportive though). If that happened I could see Szayel having an unexpected fanclub and Mayuri dodging a very angry lynchmob.

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From JOler on June 26, 2011
Hmmm ... Must be in summer school and getting close to mid-terms or finals ... So want to see what happens next ... Who 'visits' Szayel next ... If any other pregnancies result ... Szayel's shocked and stammering reaction to a second pregnancy that was more than likely (if not undoubtedly) his ... His stunned reaction would be priceless ...
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From JOler on June 14, 2011
Sigh ... Lost my last review ... Will try to remember it all ...

Hmmm ... Sounds like Szayel wants a pretty little princess to pamper, spoil, and dote on.

Still keeping my fingers crossed that a massively misunderstood Rangeku (all the rumors of her promiscuity are just that ... Rumors ... She's never 'done it' with anyone and Gin was totally platonic but she still had a massive crush on him when he left with Aisen) will get pregnant because she volunteers).

Would be interesting if Rukia and Orahime found out and for various reasons volunteered ~ especially if Rukia and Ichigo had an argument and that was her reason, Orahime did it in support of Rukia ... and both had 'prefect' timing ~ test positive.

Kind of wonder if Soi Fon isn't having a very difficult pregnancy already ... A friend of mine had severe morning sickness through all of her pregnancies and had to be confined to bed for the last trimester because it was so bad ... If he finds out and was extra caring and attentive when permitted near her it might change several person's views of him ~ including hers.

Wonder if the evolution to the human-type form made the gametes viable with humans and shinigami at this stage ... Thereby throwing off his initial hypothesis. It would also be interesting to see him subcontiously respond more protectively and possessively toward those carrying his offspring once his animal side subliminally picked it up (though his evolved self doesn't realize it or notice any change in his behavior). This could besomewhere around the third or fourth month of pregnancy). The candidates who test positive but got that way from different guys (soon before or after being with him) would not elicit the same behavioral changes ... Raising speculations from observers about the reason which would have to be tested and confirmed by paternity tests when it is safe).

Can see Yamamoto being pulled in and supporting Unohana's side much to Mayuri's annoyance and causing much snarling on his part.

Glad to see Akon is more or less on Unohana's and Nemu's side.
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From JOler on June 07, 2011
*bites nails* i didn't kill your muse with that last review did I? *whimper*
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on May 31, 2011
my whole long review went caplui, so i'll just say this 2nd attempt that i hope szay & nemu get some private time & that their reunion was surprisingly sweet. the scene w/the women comparing notes on sex was funny yet icky on behalf of main pairing at the same time. update soon.
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