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Reviews for The Real King

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From Shirochan on November 04, 2011
    Thanks for another wonderful chapter, although you had and still have that much to do. Sayzel's appearance in the last chapter was quite shocking and i'm really curious about what he is up to and how much he will reach his goal. Poor Grimmjow really has a though time, but i really loved the image of an 'nesting' parent with all the pillows and blankets. Great idea. Sry if few things sound strange, but english isn't my mothertongue, nevertheless i wanted to say how much i like your story. So I will be staying tuned for the next chapter (how long it ever will take ;-) ). wish you a good time meanwhile.
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  • From Kazeshini on November 04, 2011
    Hey mate! I laughed when Ichigo was thinking about vanilla, haha. But I can't help thinking it has something to do with that sneaky Szayel!! Shifty, he is I tells ya! Two typos I saw, one was Beat instead of Beta and "Grimmjow just roasted agains" (HAHA, **cough** sorry) I assume was meant to be "rested". Love your work hun. xo
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  • From Chikagetsu on November 04, 2011
    Gorgeous! *laughing* Doing somthing like this at a time like this... of course clever Szay-chan will strike - both vulnerable and defenseless... oh poor Grimmy poor Ichi XD
    I bet their child is special in his/her feeding- after all both parents are really powerful- Its fun reading, again thanks for updating...I hope you´ll find time to write and post :)
    Best wishes
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  • From Chikagetsu on October 19, 2011
    Thanx for updating ^o^
    Once again worth the wait! I love how Grimmy´s feelings and thoughts are changing and how Ichi adapts to the situation, especially with help from Shiro *^.^*
    Muahuahua- Szayel is alive, I always thought his end to easy, after all he´s a genius, he´ll propably survive everything...
    I´ve been laughing at the end of the chapter, I really _can´t_ wait to see how crazy Szay-chan interferes with their sweet family...and to see how they wiggle out of that problem with Grimmy being so terrible powerless...
    Please update soon and again thanks for sharing:)
    Best wishes
    Chi

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  • From blueflame125 on October 18, 2011
    Oh, no! Watch out, Ichigo! Danger is coming! I hope both the parents and the baby will be alright. Can't wait to find out what Szayel has in mind for the experiment.
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  • From Kazeshini on October 17, 2011
    Oh dear, look out Ichigo and Grim!! Szayel's up to his usual mischief! I hope life's beginning to settle to a more normal pace for you my dear? As always- love your work :) xo Kazes.
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  • From ANON - NightPredator on October 17, 2011
    I just wanted to stop in and say that I really really love this story. Dom Ichigo is my favourite and this story is basically the only good one I've found of it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 16, 2011
    omgosh!!! Szayel is back. i knew something had to happen but wasn't expecting that! can't wait for the next chapter. great job!
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  • From blueflame125 on October 14, 2011
    I love how you portrayed Grimmjow. He didn't become completely submitted. Great work!
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  • From ANON - KyuRyu on October 10, 2011
    Not sure if you prefer constructive reviews or just people telling you how awesome you are, but mine is the later XD
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  • From Shirochan on October 08, 2011
    Thanks for another wonderful update. I'm always looking forward to new chapters and so just wanted to say thanks for updating althoug you have not that much time.
    It's great that H'tsu had some 'airtime' this time, I already missed him and his rather sarcastic view on life - and especially Ichigo. Poor Grim had a rough time, as always. So...thanks! I'm alreay waiting for the next chapter and therefor am hoping you have time for writing! ;-) Till next time! :-)
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  • From ANON - Blue on October 07, 2011
    So in love with your story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Ficfan3484 on September 29, 2011
    Poor Grimmjow, he's worried about the baby. I think the baby will have good parents.
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 28, 2011


    Aww, no problem and you're welcome! I think you're a terrific Bleach ff writer and am always happy to review---when I remember to! >
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  • From Stacy on September 28, 2011
    I was try to figure out how to say what I want to say. The only thing that came to mind was " are we there yet!! ". I feel like a 6 year old on the way to an amusement park! I'm just so excited!
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