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From JOler on December 31, 2011
Nice smexin' ... hmmm ... wonder if Zangetsu is gonna tell Ichigo about the developments with H'Tsu ... or if he will let Ichigo find out after the remerge.
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From blueflame125 on December 31, 2011
It's very very very HOT here. *fan myself*
Can't wait to see the babies. I wonder how Szayel will react after they remerged. XD
Oh! And Happy Holidays!!
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From JOler on December 29, 2011
I get the feeling that Ichigo's separated souls will re-merge into one before Grimmjow gets the chance to be dominant. I'm sure Szayel will be so glad when the souls are all one again so that Ichigo and Zangetsu can (hopefully ... as far as Szayel is concerned) exert some restraint on H'Tsu's treatment of him ... and I'm sure he wouldn't be too resistant to 'mistaking' Ichigo and any conserned care and feeding he might offer. Of course H'Tsu probably wouldn't be happy but Ichigo and Zangetsu would probably do what they could to temper H'Tsu's punishments. Grimmjow probably will be far less than thrilled and will most likely pull mind games at the least on Szayel unless Alpha Ichigo puts a difinitive stop to it somehow.
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From JOler on December 27, 2011
I wonder if the agony H'Tsu inflicts on Szayel during the forced mating (which H'Tsu chose instead of obliterating Szayel) will encourage Szayel to find a way to reverse the splitting of Ichigo's soul. At least that way the other two less violence prone parts are always in close enough proximity to temper or attempt to control H'Tsu ... even during the mating sessions).

Now that Grimmjow is no longer carrying the egg will his personality revert back and will he become more independent of Ichigo? Will Grimmjow and/or Ichigo be required to stay in close proximity to the egg as birds do or will they be able to leave once their strength returns ... more like frogs and fish ... or is it a conscious choice by the parents once the egg has been laid? How long will it take Grimmjow to get his strength and stamina (and all else) back? ... I'm sure Ichigo is wondering most of this too.

If the three parts of Ichigo's soul stay separated how will this affect each of their relationships with the shinigami? The visords? The few hollows that remain? Each other? Szayel? Grimmjow? Ichigo's friends and family? The egg?

If ichigo has to make the choice to remain fragmented or become one again which would he choose? And would the human have the right to choose for all three of them or would each have to agree to the decision?

Due to the soul separation is Ichigo still aware of H'Tsu's actions or will H'Tsu's dominance over Szayel be a shock? How will Grimmjow feel about the other part of Ichigo's soul dominating the other espada? If the souls re-merge in some way how will each part react to the second domination? Will Grimmjow's egg be safe from Szayel? Will a preggers Szayel be safe from Grimmjow? Will H'Tsu stick around after the fact or leave Szayel to fend for himself and the unborn egg (will Ichigo and/or Zangetsu attempt to make H'Tsu do the honorable thing and take responsibility for his actions in this regard?)? I'm sure you will show us all the drama and throw in even more twists ... can't wait ...
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From JOler on December 26, 2011
I wonder if the agony H'Tsu inflicts on Szayel during the forced mating (which H'Tsu chose instead of obliterating Szayel) will encourage Szayel to find a way to reverse the splitting of Ichigo's soul. At least that way the other two less violence prone parts are always in close enough proximity to temper or attempt to control H'Tsu ... even during the mating sessions).

Now that Grimmjow is no longer carrying the egg will his personality revert back and will he become more independent of Ichigo? Will Grimmjow and/or Ichigo be required to stay in close proximity to the egg as birds do or will they be able to leave once their strength returns ... more like frogs and fish ... or is it a conscious choice by the parents once the egg has been laid? How long will it take Grimmjow to get his strength and stamina (and all else) back? ... I'm sure Ichigo is wondering most of this too.

Due to the soul separation is Ichigo still aware of H'Tsu's actions or will H'Tsu's dominance over Szayel be a shock? How will Grimmjow feel about the other part of Ichigo's soul dominating the other espada? If the souls re-merge in some way how will each part react to the second domination? Will Grimmjow's egg be safe from Szayel? Will a preggers Szayel be safe from Grimmjow? Will H'Tsu stick around after the fact or leave Szayel to fend for himself and the unborn egg (will Ichigo and/or Zangetsu attempt to make H'Tsu do the honorable thing and take responsibility for his actions in this regard?)? I'm sure you will show us all the drama and throw in even more twists ... can't wait ...
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From ANON - BSM3 on December 26, 2011
Yo, it's the day after Christmas and all I can say is this is the best present anyone could ask for, too hott guys, Mpreg and torture, you've outdone yourself with pure awesome covered with melted epicness and a cherry of coolness on top.
I eagerly await the rest of your awesomeness!
I'm just gonna reread this a few times until you spit out some more, the beginning is just so weirdly cutely awesome... :D
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From JOler on December 24, 2011
Happy holidays ... can't wait for the next chapter. Hope the pregnancy is going well.
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From JOler on December 20, 2011
Hmmm wonderful chappie. Makes one ask...

1. Will the three souls of Ichigo merge together again somehow (either naturally or with Szayel's assistance)

2. How will Ichigo, his various parts, and Grimmjow react to H'tsu getting Szayel pregnant (especially if the souls do re-merge)?

3. Boy or girl?

4. How do they each take to being mommies ... Er daddies ... Uh parents?
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From Chikagetsu on December 19, 2011
Bwahahahaha, I have been laughing SO hard... Thank you for keeping Szay-chan alive... I never before imagined him and Hitsu a pair, but I like it... I bet Hitsu will have a hell of time keeping him XD I think its a really good plot development, I cant wait to read more- Hitsu free (poor worldXD), Zangetsu too and Grimmy�s baby coming... please try updating soon and take care :)
Best wishes
Chi
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From ANON - Rangiku on December 05, 2011
Beautifully written storyline. Your story is the most captivating and enjoyable of all the Ichi/Grim that I have ever read before. I love the way you kept Grim's character despite him being a Beta. i also love the way you made their interaction sweet but not entirely mushy. ( Grim, blame it on the Hormones, I love you the wayyou are). This is the best Bleach MPreg I have read. Most of the Mpreg I have read usually portrays the "pregnant" one being too hormonal & clingy, which to me don't give Justice to the Original characters.
Yours is really perfect portral of the guys. Love them. * Hugs & Kisses to you for Great Job & more motivation?*
Really hope they can be released frm Syazel's cluthes soon.

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From blueflame125 on December 04, 2011
I'm so glad they met again, even temporarily. Ichigo's possessive behavior made me squeal too. XD
Szayel is so creepy. Maybe Ichigo should let H�tsu have his way with him when he has a chance.
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From Kazeshini on December 04, 2011
Oh shit- Szayel, you're in for a world of hurt when H'tsu gets a hold of you! :) Poor Grimm, he needs his Alpha :( My cousin is over-due on her pregnancy by a week and she's really sooky to her hubby atm. Grimm needs a hug. lol. I love you're work, sorry I haven't been in touch lately. I haven't been well, but I chat to you about via email. There were a couple of tiny typos in the chapter... but I forgot where... sorry. I hope all is well for you. xoxoxo Kazes.
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From ANON - gollumsfriend on November 12, 2011

Most importantly, congratulations to you and your hubby on your upcoming "munchkin"! *hugs*

Thanks so much for the update. I enjoyed it, even though Szayel irritates me. XD Have to admit I was glad to read your A/N claim that our boys won't be hanging out with the loon for very long. :D

Can't wait to have them back together already, even though it's only been a chapter since they were! LOL Smut or no-smut, I always look forward to your next chapters, thank you!
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From blueflame125 on November 10, 2011
Congratulation!! Please take care of yourself. :D

You left me so intrigued. Can't wait to read their reunion. Good job!
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From ANON - KyuRyu on November 08, 2011
Your story makes me happy inside XD I can honestly no fanfiction, from and fandom, has ever pleased me as much as this one. I have it in my phone's bookmarks and I'm always so excited when there is a new chapter. Hands down my favorite fanfic of all time (and I read a LOT of fanfiction)
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