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  • Mon Capitan

    By : Daktalakpak
    Category: Bleach > Yaoi - Male/Male
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    Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach, nor the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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  • AN: Okay, so I took my time writing this story. I was careful with it; planning it, shaping it to be what I wanted. I think in some way I achieved what I wanted.

    This is dedicated to my best friend, Anni! I love you Anni and I hope this shows how much. Well... maybe not ^^ Not in that pervy way.. or perhaps I do XD


    Summary: Renji and his Taichou have a few days alone in the human world. One of them has plans to use that opportunity to get what they want.

    Byakuya/Renji

    Warnings: PWP(in my opinion ;)), Anal, Oral, M/M, Yaoi, Oneshot, COMPLETE

    Translation: (In case someone doesn’t know but I doubt that, someone who doesn't know would be reading this :))

    Taichou - Captain
    Fukutaichou - Lieutenant
    Soutaichou - General
    Senkaimon - World Penetration Gate (which the use to travel between Soul Society and the living/human world)
    Zanpakutou - Soul Slayer
    Senbon Sakura - Kuchiki Byakuya's sword
    Zabimaru - Abarai Renji's sword
    Hai - Yes
    Haori - A hip- or thigh-length kimono coat
    Hakama - Pants



    ~Mon Capitan~


    "Tomorrow the Research Bureau is going to start a project and that is why they are going to close the gates to Soul Society for a few days," Renji explained, trying to imitate the person at the bureau office, rolling his eyes. "Geez! That guy really needs to learn how to relax," he sighed looking at Kuchiki-Taichou. "So are we still going?"

    Kuchiki Byakuya lifted his eyes away from the documents he was reading. "Yes," he simply answered.

    "All right, I'll make the preparations," Renji nodded leaving Kuchiki-Taichou's office.

    As soon as his Fukutaichou was gone, Kuchiki-Taichou closed his eyes and sighed. The next two days would be long, but hopefully worth it, and if anything went as planned, it would be more than that.

    ~***~

    That evening the Taichou and the Fukutaichou of the sixth division were walking calmly toward the Senkaimon. Renji was a little anxious. It had been a while since they had gone together on this kind of trip if it even could be called that. They were going to hunt hollows and sent the wandering souls to Soul Society. This kind of job didn't require either a Taichou or a Fukutaichou but Soutaichou Yamamoto had said: 'It will keep your body and mind healthy as sharp, also your Zanpakutou could use some exercise.' Renji was sure that the old man had been smoking something illegal lately but he didn't complain about the order since his Taichou had gone along with it.

    Renji really missed the days when he had been selected to be Kuchiki Byakuya's Fukutaichou. Back then, Kuchiki-Taichou had been driving him mad with his continuous fights that he called 'exercises'. A battle after battle and no end in sight until suddenly one day Kuchiki-Taichou had informed him that he was ready to be his second in command. That was the day Rukia went to the living world and disappeared. That was so long ago. It felt as if eons had passed since that faithful day. Maybe it had. He didn't care either way as long as he was the Fukutaichou of the sixth division.

    As they reached the gate, a couple of Hell Butterflies fluttered to them. One of them landed on Renji's outstretched hand. He looked at the insect for a moment before he turned to address his Taichou. "Just a reminder that the gate is closed for a few days. Otherwise we are free to go."

    "Understood," Kuchiki-Taichou said as the gate opened and he walked forward expecting his Fukutaichou to follow, and Renji did, without a hesitation.

    ~***~

    "Should I do it or will you?" Renji stood arms crossed across his chest. A huge hollow was running towards them at neck breaking speed.

    Kuchiki-Taichou didn't answer but unsheathed his sword and then he was gone. A second later, he landed behind the hollow that was now dissolving into thin air.

    "Bravo, Taichou! You are as good as ever," Renji praised him and took couple of steps forward before hearing a low rumble behind his back. Renji turned around and saw another hollow but he was too slow to draw his sword. In an instant, he was swung out of the way and his world went black.

    Kuchiki-Taichou didn't react upon seeing his Fukutaichou crash into a building wall. He waited until the hollow attacked. The hollows aim was to kill Renji and that was something he would not allow a lowly hollow to do. With a few deadly words, Senbon Sakura finished the hollow off. He walked over to Renji's unconscious body. He checked if Renji had received any serious damage but he looked to be just knocked out.

    Returning Senbon Sakura to its sword from, he sheathed it and crouched down next to his Fukutaichou. He gently took Renji into his arms and lifted him off the ground. Renji wasn't exactly a fairy but Kuchiki-Taichou could easily carry him a short distance without breaking a sweat. Luckily, they were not far from the place they were supposed to spend the night.

    The flat was used as one of the many headquarters around the world. It was more of a place to sleep and treat the wounded in case of an emergency. For the next few days it was going to be used only for sleeping if anything went well. The fact that Renji already had himself hauled into a wall was not a very promising start. The hollows that had attacked them had been able to hide their reiatsu and that was something Kuchiki-Taichou didn't like one bit.

    ~***~

    When Renji came to, he instinctively reached for Zabimaru but found it missing from his side. He looked around realising that he was safe inside the flat, which they were using during the missions. Zabimaru and Senbon Sakura were resting on the table next to the couch, which Renji was resting on as well as was his haori too. It was then he noticed that he was bare-chested.

    A sudden pain made him flinch. His back felt sore which wasn't surprising since it had been quite a blow he took if he had even lost his consciousness. He relaxed back against the couch and it was then he heard the bathroom door open. He jumped when suddenly Kuchiki-Taichou was standing next to him.

    "I see you are awake," Kuchiki-Taichou stated, staring Renji in the eye.

    "Ha-hai," Renji stammered. He wasn't quite prepared to see his Taichou without clothes, wearing only a towel, moreover, without his hair accessories. A drop of water from Kuchiki-Taichou's hair fell down on Renji's bare chest.

    "I-I didn't sense the hollows, Taichou," Renji said starting to get uncomfortable under the gaze of his Taichou.

    "Neither did I," Kuchiki-Taichou hardly moved as he spoke.

    He kept staring at Renji. Renji looked away and waited for Kuchiki-Taichou to leave. Renji was about to get up from the couch to get away from the fierce gaze of his Taichou but Kuchiki-Taichou beat him to it. His calm voice stopped Renji. "Can I ask one thing?"

    "Sure," he answered little too quickly.

    Kuchiki-Taichou leaned over him finally looking away from his eyes. "These are..." Kuchiki-Taichou trailed his fingers along the tattoo on Renji's chest. "... exquisite."

    Renji looked dumfounded. "They are...er...nice." He looked from Kuchiki-Taichou's hand to his eyes again. "You wanna know how I got them?"

    Kuchiki-Taichou glanced at his face. "Hai."

    Kuchiki-Taichou still kept touching him and he didn't want to anger his Taichou, so he let him. "These tattoos are bound to Zabimaru. The more progress I make with him the more lines I get on my skin. These right here," he pointed at the newest ones. "I got when I reached Bankai."

    More water drops fell on his chest as he spoke and Kuchiki-Taichou was smearing them with his fingers.

    "Interesting," Kuchiki-Taichou said and suddenly pulled away. "Sit up."

    Renji didn't hesitate obeying an order. Kuchiki-Taichou placed his hand on Renji's shoulder. He observed his back for a moment. "Take a bath." His hand left his shoulder and soon Renji felt him messing with his hair. His hair was let loose, limiting his range of view to the sides. A few strands fell down on his face tickling his nose. "We will treat your back after that."

    Renji stared after his Taichou's retreating back. He got up, sighing before making his way to the bathroom. The bathtub was already full with steaming water. Renji untied his hakama, letting it drop on the floor. He tucked his socks off and climbed into the hot tub. He gasped in pain as the water came to contact with his injured skin. Maybe he had been hurt more seriously than he thought. However, he was sure that his injuries were just scratches, nothing more.

    He took a deep breath and relaxed his whole body. Closing his eyes he left his thoughts wander. Something was not sitting right with his Taichou. Kuchiki-Taichou was acting weird for some reason. Renji had never had such kindness from him before. He wasn't sure if you could call it kindness. His Taichou seemed thoughtful as if something was on his mind. Maybe he was putting too much thought into his Taichou's actions.

    He took a sponge from the edge of the tub and rubbed himself clean. He didn't dare to touch his back. He finished up and climbed out of the tub drying himself off. He wrapped a towel around his waist and stepped out of the bathroom.

    He didn't see his Taichou anywhere in the living room, so he went to his bag that he had brought with him. He picked new pair of socks and a new white haori out of it. Just then he remembered that he had left his hakama in the bathroom. He turned around to retrieve them but he was stopped by his Taichou who was standing right behind him.

    "Whoa, Taichou, don't scare me like that!" he exclaimed.

    Kuchiki-Taichou only raised his eyebrow, saying nothing.

    Renji side stepped him after a moment and came back to his Taichou, wearing now his hakama. He noticed that Kuchiki-Taichou had not moved from his spot and seemed to be lost in thought. "Taichou?" he asked.

    Kuchiki-Taichou turned to look at him as if nothing out of ordinary had happened. "Sit down here," he said, walking over to the table, indicating that Renji had to sit on the chair next to it.

    Renji walked over to him, doing as he said. He saw that there were some bandages and ointment on the table. Kuchiki-Taichou took the ointment and opened it. Renji turned his back to him, taking his hair out of the way. His Taichou's warm hands carefully rubbed the soothing medicine onto his skin. Hundreds of years of battle experience forced one to learn some of the most basic things about how to treat injuries, so Renji knew he was in good hands. Kuchiki-Taichou's hands left and he heard him clean them in the bowl that had always been on the table.

    Kuchiki-Taichou instructed him to hold the bandage as he wrapped it around his chest. Renji felt his Taichou's breath on his skin from time to time and it made him shiver. He blushed a little when he heard a faint chuckled behind him. He just knew it was because his Taichou could feel him shivering. Kuchiki-Taichou added one more layer before tying the bandage so that it wouldn't open any time soon.

    Renji stood up and walked over to where he had left his haori and socks. This time he heard his Taichou's soft footsteps against the floor. He turned around to face his Taichou before he got too close but found himself almost nose to nose with the man again.

    Kuchiki-Taichou raised his finger to caress Renji's cheek gently while gazing into his eyes. Renji's breath hitched at the touch and he stared at his Taichou wide-eyed. "Taichou?" he whispered but then his lips were covered by the man he called his Taichou.

    The kiss he received was gentle and caressing. It brought Kuchiki-Taichou's bare chest into contact with his own. When Renji felt a tongue asking for an entrance into his mouth, he opened it and started to respond to the other man's kiss. It intensified, growing more passionate as his Taichou got the encouragement he needed. Renji felt him wrap his arms around him. He was so distracted by the kiss that he didn't notice when Kuchiki-Taichou removed his own towel and his hakama, letting them drop on the ground.

    Suddenly - or that was how Renji felt - Kuchiki-Taichou withdrew from his arms, ending the kiss. Fear began to grip hold of Renji's body but it soon faded when Kuchiki-Taichou took a few steps towards the bedroom and holding out his hand as if asking Renji to take it, which he did. He walked up to his Taichou and took his hand, being led into one of the many bedrooms of the house.

    Renji closed the door behind them and then he was pulled into his Taichou's arms again. Kuchiki-Taichou showered his body with kisses as he went down, falling down on his knees. Renji's breathing became irregular as his Taichou's kisses reached his cock. He could have never imagined even in his wildest dreams what it would feel like to have someone touching him as intimately as his Taichou was now touching him. It seemed that the fact that it was Kuchiki-Taichou doing this to him manifold the pleasure received.

    Kuchiki-Taichou's mouth closed around his weeping shaft, making Renji lick his lips and gulp. He was far too aroused to last long and soon he was spilling his seed into his Taichou's willing mouth. His Taichou cleaned every drop from his cock, standing up he kissed Renji making him taste himself in the kiss.

    Kuchiki-Taichou pulled away and settled down on the futon in the middle of the room. Renji followed, being pushed on his back. His Taichou leaned over him, kissing him senseless. His Taichou's hand wandered over his body, touching him here and there. He rose to sit and spread Renji's legs softly. Coating his fingers with saliva, staring Renji in the eye as he did so, he pushed one inside his eager soon to be lover.

    His Taichou's fingers felt strange inside him at first but he relaxed as Kuchiki-Taichou used his mouth to distract him by kissing and suckind his inner thighs. Renji didn't even notice when the second and third finger entered him but it didn't even matter as the fingers were suddenly withdrawn. Renji frowned at this but it was replaced by anticipation as his Taichou took hold of his legs and placed them on his shoulders. Without any other warning Kuchiki-Taichou pushed himself inside his Fukutaichou in one slick move.

    Renji gasped and gritted his teeth at the sudden pain. He took time to relax his muscles and nodded once as a sign to his Taichou to move. Kuchiki-Taichou started to move in and out with a slow pace. Suddenly Renji gasped again as his Taichou hit the spot inside him which made him see stars. His Taichou sped the pace up, making Renji gasp at every thrust. Renji's hands grasped his Taichou's arms with a bruising grip as he was brought nearer the edge every second.

    Kuchiki-Taichou was looking his straight in his eyes. Renji couldn't control himself anymore as the look his Taichou gave him undid him completely. Kuchiki-Taichou was not far off either and with a few more thrusts he came inside his Fukutaichou. He collpased against his Fukutaichou and they stayed like that for a few minutes. He withdrew out of Renji but laid down on him. He sucked Renji's collar bone, biting down on it and made Renji yelp in surprise.

    Kuchiki-Taichou sat up on Renji's waist, looking down at him. Renji looked into his eyes. "Taichou, that was--"
    He was silenced by a finger against his lips. Kuchiki-Taichou leaned in close to his ear. "Call me Byakuya."

    "Byakuya," Renji whispered against his Taichou's lips before he was rewarded with a fierce kiss.


    AN: Hmm, I hope you noticed that there were some things I wrote on purpose. I could say nothing was a mistake from my part. Only if I made some really huge mistake... but I think you know what I mean.


    Ok, enough of that *slaps herself* please review and tell me what you think. Was it complete flop? If you tell me what you thought I might write more if you thought it was good. I won't know it if you stay silent.
    By the way, this was my first ever Bleach fanfic. I've been watching and reading Bleach for over a year now and I just love it, sometimes I don't but that is the way tv-shows go you know.
    Ja ne!
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