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for Mon Capitan

by Daktalakpak

person Ryokitty
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an interesting story. I do hope you continue. I wish the second chapter could have been a little longer though. Still great after all. X3 MOAR!!
person sameyler
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, thats great.this is actlly the frist bleach fanfic ive ever read.ah, wish i could write this good.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!
person MibuWolf
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, and one more thing: You have great talent... you should continue to write more great stories... forgot to add that last night
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO So If I made a typo I get bad review. Honestly people" Sometimes it's good to check the keyboard for letters that are next to each other. So waht I typed Taichou = Taivhou... C is next to v so I didn't notice when I made the mistake.

I always check keyboard if someone has spelled something wrong 'cause it's so common mistake! Well, I'm studying Japanese so I kinda felt hurt that you assumed that I made in on purpose! NEVER! I just rewrote the ending and didn't auto check it by the programm I used or even read it myself.
person MibuWolf
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I do believe I liked this, my Lady. It'd make me happy if you wrote another one. Encore, Encore! ^_-

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