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Reviews for A Modern Courtship

By : crunchysalad
  • From Dragonprincess01 on January 18, 2011
    I find this story interesting. The premise of the arrancar and it devours humans and hallows alike while their bodies are sleeping is facinating. I have not read anything remotetly similar to this storyline and believe me I have read various Byakuya and Renji stories.

    Good Job! Keep up the good work. I will wait patiently for more.
    DP01
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 14, 2011
    Just when they were exchanging personal stories.. BAM! Back to professionalism. le sigh
    Great chapter!!
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  • From KiraSahari on January 13, 2011
    Oh my Gosh... *¬* our dear Byakuya saw the road to heaven hahahahahaha nosebleed, nosebleed!! Renji is so adorable and sexy! Poor Renji, he didn't deserve to be treated like that, I think he is already very attracted to his lovely Taicho. I don't know who is going to snap first, Byakuya is a control freak but he is getting closer to his limit, sweet Renji is going to be in hell when he finally realize he is falling for Byakuya and he is so honest that he is not going to be able to stay calm about that, can't wait for next chapter! Thank you so much for sharing!!! =)
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  • From ANON - Shere on January 12, 2011
    After checking this story everyday, I see you have reviewed! I actually screamed with excitement xD This chappie did not disappoint me in the slightest, not counting the fact that it ENDED, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Byakuya had better not push Renji away from him! I hope Renji's realization is something good xD Please updat soon! PleasepleasepleasepleasepleasePuh-LEEEEE-eeeeeeez!
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  • From satterb on January 12, 2011
    Awww! I was startled when Byakuya suddenly became angry with Renji. Poor Renji! This fic is very, very good. I don't believe you were being overly descriptive in this chapter. This story is very well put together, and the characters are believable. Both Renji and Byakuya are very complex people, so they should have some deep emotions. I can't wait for more. Thanks for all your hard work. Best of all, this story has a very captivating plot, but when you can finally get down to anything hot and heavy, none of us will be dissapointed. TEEHEE!
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  • From ANON - chiron11 on December 31, 2010
    This is an engaging fic. Your diction and cadence are artful and consistent, making it a very readable piece. Good storytelling. I want more!
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  • From Shadowhime on December 28, 2010
    this is so amazing. There are some parts where i feel there's too much detail but i love it all the same. It's so hard to find good fan-fictions, ones that keep the people in character. Keep up the good work, waiting for an update.
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  • From ANON - xpinkcloudx on December 19, 2010
    Renji grinned as he cupped his gigai's impressive bulge. There was a cocky tilt to his chin as he turned towards Akon. "I see you got the size right."

    lol..sounds like something Renji would say. Byakuya..so cute..trying to be interested in something else..but at Renji's gigai..particularly the nether region. Renji and Byakuya in Karakuratown... I always wanted a fic where they both end up there together. So many possibilities. Both of them in civilian clothing..in a more casual atmosphere..yeah can't wait. I enjoyed this chapter a lot and don't worry you're too good a writer to disappoint anyone. I'll keep reading this for sure.
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  • From Iyasu on December 16, 2010
    I like the way that this is going. It's well-written, and flows wonderfully, not to mention that I love the way you're drawing from canon. I can't wait to read more of this and your other work.
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  • From ANON - Shere on December 15, 2010
    This is the best RenjixByakuya fanfic I've come across so far :D You're doing an extroadinary job! Please update as soon as possible. I beeeeeg of you!
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  • From satterb on December 13, 2010
    Actually, I read all your fics! I love this one. I think it's a great story. I laughed out loud when Renji grabbed the crotch of his gigai, and then even harder when Byakuya had to admonish him! I look forward to more of this and all your other stories. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From KiraSahari on December 13, 2010
    Love it! Hope you keep writing it because I am dying to read more, I like when the story has a slow pace, it feels more real, I don't believe in love at first sight, I believe that love is and must be something you build with time. Byakuya and Renji are very different so if is going to exist a relationship between them, they will need to find a balance between their personalities, if they are able to find that balance they will be a great couple because they will give each other what they have been needing for a very long time, well, just my humble opinion xP
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  • From Mizscattered on November 28, 2010
    This is really good so far. Byakuya drinking was great :) he needs to loosen up a bit :P and the conversation between him and Renji and how he prefers the company of men made me giggle XD. I really like this pairing and I can't wait to see where you take this! :D
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  • From ANON - xpinkcloudx on November 25, 2010
    Hi, I really love your story so far. My favorite part has to be where Byakuya catches Rukia and Renji having a private moment. I actually said "awesome" out loud when I read the part about Renji admitting that he liked men. I couldn't contain my excitement I knew Bya-kun would be surprised. I love your Byakuya here. He's crushing hard like a school girl but it's sweet but still IC. I don't blame him though Renji is just very attractive in a lot of ways. He looks rough but inside he's so much more. I can't wait to read your future chapters.

    I was wondering if you had a fanfiction.net account also as I go that site often but here is nice too. This fic is already a fave in my top fave ByaRen stories! I'll be copying and pasting it to my notepad documents on my pc so I can read it again without going online!

    xpinkcloux
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  • From satterb on November 21, 2010
    All I can say is "WOW"! This is your best work yet! I'm really impressed. I love this story, and I love this pairing. Some may think they've been done to death, but as opposites in the most extreme, they fit together perfectly. You've got them both nailed! I can't wait to see more of this. Thanks for all your hard work!
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