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Reviews for A Modern Courtship

By : crunchysalad
  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2011
    P.S
    The sex scene was hot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2011
    Well hello. Same Anon from before - I'm glad you were pleased with my comment, and I assure you I haven't said anything I didn't mean too, and I am most certain I didn't exaggerate at all.

    Chapter Six was truly wonderful - it made me feel like I was there in the dream, feeling Byakuya's uncertainties and having the nudging feeling something's wrong. I liked all the small hints along the chapter.

    But that was a long while ago.
    Let's talk about Chapter Seven.
    ....
    ..
    .
    Well. Dear writer, since I have good faith in you, I'm sure that in the next update I will be able to collect the pieces of my broken heart, along with Renji, and continue onwards to a better future with puppies, rainbows and merry gay sex.
    dkfgjldfjgfdlk
    Dear god women, that was excellent, but so, so depressing. I shared the sadness with about four other friends. And then! They were sad, too.
    Stupid Byakuya and his stupid emotional defects. Take the "Royal family important business" and shove it where Renji's cock could've been if you weren't such a stuck up bitch.
    Yeah.
    So.
    Love your writing. Keep it up!
    Hurreh.

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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 14, 2011
    OH NO! Eternal sad face!!
    I suppose it would be more realistic for Byakuya to resist Renji before they finally get together but man, reading that scene... super harsh. But again, expected for someone like Byakuya. Hopefully Ichigo will be able to lift Renji's spirits!!
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 13, 2011
    THAK YOU! I really needed this! There was practically NO updates for any cool stories recently. Thank you so much! This was great! Renji is awesome and Byakuya is ... as always. GO RENJI! I hope he will do billion of really cool stuff and Byakuya will really regret to be such an ass and coward. And I hope he will miss Renji terribly!
    I also really hope that the next update will be sooner than the last one... ^_^
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  • From satterb on June 13, 2011
    Byakuya is such a pussy! LOL Poor Renji...this is breaking my heart. I really want to hear what's going on in dick-wad's mind right now. I hope he feels like shit! Anyway. I look forward to more of this great story. I was thrilled to see it updated. Please don't make us wait too long. Later!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2011
    Eeeek. *grabs Renji by the neck and shakes him* Renji, you idiot drinking yourself into a stupor while the Arrancar is draining Byakuya's reiatsu. Get your tattooed ass back to him right this instant or I swear to god no amount of the hitting Rukia gives you is going to measure to the pounding I'm going to do.

    Now with the immediate reaction out of the way. Well done, darling. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. *sends a withering glare towards Renji who is still drinking and bemoaning his feelings to his captain*
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 20, 2011
    Oh snap!!! Renji better hurry!!
    great chapter!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 20, 2011
    WoW! That was HOOOOOOOOOOOOT! I loved the rimming part! Although... it's good it was just a dream because it surely wouldn't be enough to prepare poor Byakuya if it was real.
    Too bad that Renji missed it but on the other hand (hand... ha!) he had masturbated earlier!
    I'm REALLY very glad that you are not going to drop it!
    THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT UPDATE!
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  • From satterb on May 19, 2011
    hot and sexy, and ominous and worrisome too! LOL I was thrilled to see this updated. I was happy to see them finally together, even though it's not real. I look forward to more. Please update soon. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Lady Akribos-san on May 13, 2011
    Oh, this fic is so fantastic! I couldn't stop reading, really. You managed to describe them and their personalities in an awesome way. The way they both have feels for each other, how they realise it... And you let this chapter at the most interesting moment! No! I need to know what will happen to my poor Byakuya!
    I usually read on FanFiction.net, but I wanted to try and read some ByaRen here and now I don't regret my decision. I hope you update soon. I have no Twitter, so I'll try to check this every week ^^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 11, 2011
    This story is great! Byakuya is... so much like himself... like always. Poor Renji.
    PLEASE continue the story!
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  • From ANON - xpinkcloudx on May 10, 2011
    I re-read the whole story just now to refresh my memory. I love it. Renji watching Byakuya shower all the while.. sexy. Then some angst. I can't wait to read more. Your stories are fantastic.

    xpinkcloudx
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2011
    In a fandom, you can only come across one or so many fanfics that are really, really good. That have good character development, a subtle humor, stay true to the fandom and so forth.
    This is, dear writer, one of them, and so I have to implore you to update it or else I'll whine to all of my friends 'till the windows in my house will break.

    BECAUSE THIS FANFIC IS COMPLETELY FABULOUS AND OMG YOU TWO STUPID APES FUCK ALREADY KTHX.
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  • From satterb on April 29, 2011
    Poor Renji...his close friends could tell how he felt. The shower scene with Byakuya was hot! I wonder how he's been feeling about all this. I hope the next update is from his POV!
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  • From ANON - anon on January 24, 2011
    Absolutely love this -- can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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