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Reviews for Undisclosed Devotion

By : horrorgal
  • From ANON - Anise on July 05, 2013
    (4) It'll be interesting to see just how this relationship progresses since before now Uryu hadn't even considered it. I wonder if Ichigo will be able to control himself, although Uryu is more than capable of holding his own as was very evident this chapter so he can't get too out of line ;)

    Also loved the action it was well written and I had no difficulty following what was happening. I'm looking forward to seeing more of the investigation into what's going on and of course seeing how these guys work together :)

    You're such a fast updater, I love that ^_^ It makes it easy to look forward to the next chapter^^

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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on July 04, 2013
    I loved this chapter; the way you wrote the fighting scenes it made me feel like I was there watching it very believable.. it wouldn't surprise me if Mayuri ended up evil he's already half insane anyway. the story is just getting interesting cant wait to see how things progress. keep it up thanks
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on July 02, 2013
    it was a nice chapter and (don't mean to sound rude or offensive) but it felt like you were sort of rushing the story at bit. I mean orihime finding out and the next day she's trying to set ichigo up I would think she would be hurting more. and then the kiss between ichigo and ishida at the end too fast. also ishida personality needs some work. hes not the type to take things lying down he wont admit his feelings easily, and he's very proud of been a quincy.

    cant wait for your next chapter and too see what the mystery is with the hollows. keep it up


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  • From ANON - Anise on June 28, 2013
    (2) I'm so happy to have found this, these guys are one of my favourite pairings and it's been awhile since I've seen a new story about them :) Also the story itself seems to be the start of a rather intriguing mystery with what's going on, I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out ^_^

    Can't wait for more^^
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on June 27, 2013
    thanx for another brilliant chapter. sounds like there is something going on cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on June 20, 2013
    cool story. it grabbed me as soon as I started reading it. cant wait for the next chapter keep it up. (is it sad of me that I don't feel sorry for orihime at all. )
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