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Reviews for Undisclosed Devotion

By : horrorgal
  • From SickPuppy on April 28, 2017

    Really enjoyed this - read all through from start to finish. I do hate Mayuri as a character, so the fact you got me smiling at something he said (chapter 11, when he questions the boys after they've come out) is impressive.

    Minor gripe - rouge = red; rogue = rebel. I'm sure you meant the latter, rather than describing some of the shinigami as red!

    However, awesome, and sweet! SP


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  • From ANON - Anise on June 01, 2015
    (16) I've only just now seen the couple of updates since the last time I commented and I'm sorry it took so long to read and leave a comment, especially considering I really like the way the story is moving along :)

    As for this most recent chapter all I keep thinking is that Mayuri is certainly creepy but he's also deadly, you'd have to be an idiot to get on the wrong side of him. Can't wait to see what he's dreamed up for Saburou and how the rest of the confrontation plays out.

    Looking forward to the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens :)
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  • From ANON - Mai on April 24, 2015
    Hello, I have just read whole story at once. Great job!!! I really enjoy how you can combine romantic scenes and action. The plot is very interesting, I cant wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Kristin on April 09, 2015
    Yea, I haven't been on here in a while so I was able to read a few chapters. They were amazing! I love where you are taking this story, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Anise on October 01, 2014
    (14) Happy to see two updates in a row and such action packed ones at that^^ It's a frightening prospect that someone as powerful as Ryuken can be manipulated into attacking his own son, this is a rather impressive adversary. Again the action was well done and the story is certainly an interesting one, I can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2014
    Really enjoying Ichigo/Uryu. A great couple and like that they are going slow and finally starting to feel comfortable enough to go further.
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  • From ANON - X_TardisxTaichou_X on July 25, 2014
    Ahhh! I love this! Just picked it up today around 4 and already done. Can't wait to see where this is going! You're such a tease. Haha. Thanks for a great read, though!
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  • From ANON - Anise on February 05, 2014
    (10) Oh my god the ending, I loved the ending^^

    Poor Uryuu, he's smart and does everything right and yet he still ends up getting the worst of it. Though I do look forward to seeing if Mayuri has anything of actual use to add to everything, it's quite the little mystery they've got.

    Another great chapter and the action scene was so well done, I can't wait to see what's next :)
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  • From ANON - Anise on January 26, 2014
    (9) It's been so long since we've seen these guys, I was happy to see an update but that ending is torture, hopefully nothing too terrible happens to Ichigo. At least we know Uryu is capable of helping him, I look forward to finding out what happened in the next chapter and how everyone deals with the aftermath. Also I loved the Ryuuken, Isshin bit, those two are always good for a bit of side story - looking forward to next time :)
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  • From ANON - Anise on August 09, 2013
    (7) I have to admit I'm with Ichigo in that I wonder if Mayuri is as innocent as everyone assumes but then he just invites doubt with the way he acts. But it was nice to see some Yoruichi-Kisuke interaction, they're always a fun pair and Chad was awfully sweet and understanding, Orihime couldn't do much better :) I'm looking forward to the update, a cliffhanger about sex and chocolate is just mean ;)
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on August 08, 2013
    no fair it stops just when it gets to the good part. absolutely love it
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  • From ANON - M on July 28, 2013
    I wish I had something constructive to say. I just wanted to let you know that I love this and how much you're teasing everything out. Like a long classic rock song that takes time to get to the good part.
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on July 14, 2013
    that was so cool. cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 13, 2013
    (5) Poor Orihime, I do feel badly for her. As for both the relationship between Ichigo and Ishida and the mystery of what's going on I really do like the progression of them both. I like how much thought you've put into everything, I'm looking forward to more :)
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on July 08, 2013
    I don't read IchixIshi very often, but since I enjoy your writing style I decided to give it a try.

    I'm finding it to be a really enjoyable story so far. Don't know what others are saying since I don't usually read other reviews, but I'm personally happy you didn't have them jumping into the sack together at this point in the story. I like reading an author's version of a 'developing' relationship.

    My biggest hope right now is just that you update much more frequently than your other story. ~_^
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