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By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - Kazes on October 24, 2009
    Ooow Excitement! It was good to have a reminder of the way everybody looks, Zan wasn't what I was picturing so that was good. Ya we have some old Espada back! Who'da thought we could have them back :D I gots ta present for you Nova :D
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  • From Tiptipnaway on October 24, 2009
    I am soooo excited for chapter 24 now. And yay!!! for Espadas that are still alive. I can draw. Well, sort of. I draw chibis and cutie little things. I make pins and what not at anime conventions. I could draw cute little versions and send them to you if thats allright. Just let me know. I think my email is hidden on here, I don't know why, Ive tried to make it unhidded but here it is. bluedragon824@sbcglobal.net Just let me know I'll get started right away for you.
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  • From JOler on October 24, 2009
    hmm ... a match for Nnoitra, what about Nemu? She's Kurotsuchi's testtube daughter, she'd possibly go for him or maybe for Szayel. I could also see Szayel with Hisagi just as easily. I mean, the kids weren't even sure if Szayel was male or female. Too bad Orihime's daughter isn't grown up enough for Ulquiorra he might not get Orihime since Uuryuu has her but at least he'd still be family.

    Can't wait for the next installment.

    mofaf1
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on October 23, 2009
    I'd love to give drawing the kids a try. Can't promise anything, or anything good, but I'd like to try sometime.
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  • From ANON - Sarada on October 23, 2009
    Hey,

    I really love your story, I've been following it since the early chapters of Crossbreeding, and I check everyday for new updates, you really do write fast! I'm so happy that there will be another sequel, and I read that you take requests for it, my only request would be for Grimm and Nell to have a kid, Grimm is so awesome as a daddy, and he didn't really get to enjoy fatherhood with Zan that much.

    I was also wondering how you see Kinomi's and Zan's hairstyle.
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 23, 2009
    "“Kill them all.” Monban ordered." Oooooow **cold shiver**
    Yay! Grimmy-kun's awake! **squeel** I have an apple for you Grimmy. http://colliemon.deviantart.com/art/Bleach-meets-DN-Part1-Grimmjow-92945523?moodonly=24
    Man I hope Reina'll be okay...
    I lol at your "“I am caught somewhere between morbid fascination and abject disgust, you?” My favorite line in this chapter, I swear to god." It reminds me of me, cos I'm told that I'm the only person who thinks I'm funny. lol. Don't worry Nova I laughed too. Hmm now that I think about it, maybe that's not very reassuring... See you in the morning Santa ;)
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  • From ANON - Curtis Zidane Ziraa on October 23, 2009
    Toshiro and Karin's Wedding, and Yoruichi and Urahara's daughter stalking/terrifying Kurotsuchi. BWAHAHAHAHA! I like your fics. SO COOL!
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  • From ANON - Senya on October 22, 2009
    *blinks* Gosh, had I known that this place allows anonymous reviews I'd be commenting on most of your chapters from "Crossbreeding the future" till present **is reluctant to sign up here** [It was until your note below caught my attention].
    Both your prequel and this sequel fascinates me for some reason. Normally I'm not into fanfics with OCs for some reason, but then -back then at the prequel- when I reached the part where the first batch of kids were born, I reluctantly read the chapter and found myself liking Kinomi. I guess it's both for her personality and her association with Grimmjow..........................and boy as the story progressed till this point sometimes I'm like Ichigo "Sometimes I wonder which is my kid" [or something along the lines], between Kinomi and Col. The 'swap' in personality (or so to say) between Kinomi and Col and their fathers was laughable (in a good way) especially since Ichigo 'retaliated' by putting Zangetsu into Col's name (though to be honest I thought that Kinomi will have her "Pantera" dropped after the rescue because it initially serves as a 'cover-up' purpose from Aizen), that I feel like consoling their fathers that "Hey, at least you're both even now" [ah, but I loooove them poking fun at each other and gloating....that's Grimmjow and Ichigo for ya].
    Whoops, pardon my rambling ^^;
    I would like to drop in a request -if you don't mind- a one-shot fic between Col and Grimmjow? I would love to see a deeper father-and-son relationship/bond between them (you could write in Col's POV). There just aren't much father-and-son moments between them and I feel some level of pity for Col for being apart from him and seemingly getting to know him little [I donno how to describe it........while they both visibly fond and proud of each other as father and son respectively, I just can't shake the feeling some sort of void -in a way- within Col, though it's understandable that he's been raised majorly by Rukia and Ichigo. And Grimmjow seems to have Kinomi a lot on his mind though I can understand why since he raised her and all, but what about his son?]. Donno why this been kinda bugging me (for a long while now)....thus I request for a Col and Grimmjow one-shot, after the war..........please?
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  • From JOler on October 22, 2009
    Great fic so far, can't wait for more.

    Hmmmm .. actually I wouldn't mind seeing Isane and Byakuya hooking up for a little while anyway ... even if it doesn't become permanent. Still debating others.

    mofaf1


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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on October 22, 2009
    Things are REALLY getting good, and I can't wait for the rest. Personally, I'd like to see Kinomi hook up with Shuuhei-kun. I'm sure he's gotta like her in SOME way.
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  • From Tiptipnaway on October 22, 2009
    Another great one. Ulquiorra!!! And all the other lovely Espada *dance*
    I'm not sure what I'd like to see. More Akata and his little sis. Thats it! We didn't see much of them. So thats what I'd like to see. Aside from Gin and Aizen. Soooo Akata and little sis please. *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 21, 2009
    Awesome, I read this chapter in about 3mins :D I chuckled at the end; it's comatose, not coma toast lol. It was nice to see some old faces again. I love Starrk :D "Hey Starrk, get ya Grand Ray Cero out!" :P
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 21, 2009
    Oh Grimmjow **sob** I can't wait for him to wake up!
    I'm so glad you are feeling better Nova, :D, even though I had no idea you weren't well... I nearly died this morning when I woke and there was no Trial of Fire! But it seems it is on account of happy occasions so I suppose I can survive a few extra hours.
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 20, 2009
    Oh no I can't wait till tomorrow when Grimmy-kun gets rescued! I can't take him getting hurt, it makes me wanna cry :( This chapter was really exciting, seeing that Hurón guy again and everyone being reunited, I knew that guy would be back! :D Haha I almost got busted writing Stark/Grimmy in class today Nova! Haha oh it would have been bad too :p "F-fuck...ngh...S-stark!"
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  • From JOler on October 19, 2009
    Hmmmm ... it seems to me that Kinomi had the 'telephone' used to contact Urahara and he was told that if he didn't hear from her in 24 hours he was to tell Ichigo where the kiddies were on their 'mission'. The rest of the kids made it to the S.T.C. but did they go to see Urahara and tell him they were back and if so did he question the fact that Kinomi was missing? I'd say Ichigo and the rest of the adults in the S.S. probably know where the kids (or at least Kinomi) have been for at least half of their allotted mission time so it is highly probable that those adults most concerned for the safety of the children (Parents ~ Shinigami and Arrancar alike ~ , Taichous, and anyone else who called them friends) might be planning a rescue mission of their own with or without sanction of those above them. It also seems to me that some very lucky kiddie-poos have lots of 'splainin' to do Lucy (as said on the old I Love Lucy show). It will be interesting to see the reaction of all of the adults and to hear the explainations given by the kids. I wonder if the adults will find out about Leon being able to open a garganta, and if so how they will each take that bit of information as well as the power each of the kids really possesses that they have kept hidden for so long.

    mofaf1
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