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Reviews for Trial of Fire

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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on October 04, 2009
    LOL Soifon got bested by an 8 year old! XD
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  • From ANON - Viola on October 03, 2009
    Horray Isane has a second kid. O.o I kinda hope it is Gin's cause
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on October 03, 2009
    Love the start and can't wait for more. And glad to be of help! ^_^
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  • From JOler on October 03, 2009
    I'm enjoying this story very much but am wondering about any children by Arrancar who may have been left in Hueco Mundo because the mothers were so newly pregnant that they were unaware of their condition at the time of the rescue. Do Toshiro or Byakuya or any other male shinigami who were taken have any children 'on the other side' that they have yet to meet? I'm glad to see Grimmjaw still in uncle/daddy mode when he comes to see the kids and I'm glad that Ichigo has more or less accepted that what happened was only to protect Rukia and the kid(s). I wonder if any of the kids will develop a 'first crush' type of relationship with any of the grownups on either side. It would be funny to see Kinomi have a friend or two over when Grimmjaw or Nel drop by for a visit and the friend(s) be smitten by the visiting grownups ... wonder how the budding interest would be viewed by the adults present as well as the parents of the kids ... they are at a preteen age where such feelings sometimes emerge for the first time ... and both of those hollow adults could be seen as very attractive by some of the budding teens (of course one would hope the adults in question would have the common sense to difuse any situation of that sort and do their best to not offend the child or the parent(s) of the child).
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  • From ANON - Viola on October 03, 2009
    I love love love your story. It is very addicting to read it and I stalk this website now looking for updates. I am really happy to see Isane playing a role in a story. She is usually terribly overlooked. The one thing I was wondering about though was in chapter 12 of part one you mentioned Isane being pregnant but in this story there was no mention at all of this pregnancy or child. Did something happen to her child? Hoping not XD. I sane needs lots of cute kids
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 02, 2009
    This is awesome. I commend your abilities to create interesting new characters and I love Kinomi's zanpaktou. I spotted a couple typos but now I can't find 'em. Sorry about that. They were only tiny, I know one of them was "loss" when I think you meant "lose"... but I can't remember the other. See you again next chapter :D
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  • From Jessykins on October 02, 2009
    Great start! and yes I'm still reading, I will until you stop writting ^_^
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