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Reviews for I Am The King

By : HollowedRose
  • From NovaAlexandria on October 05, 2010
    Much Much better :)

    This chapter flowed nice and smooth and I was pleased with how it went. More so, I was happy that Ishida eventually figured out what had happened in a reasonable time line using reasonable deduction.

    It is always hardest to edit your own work because you read it how it's suppose to go. I can spend a month checking for errors and in the end I will still miss some because as the writer you know what it is suppose to say so you read it that way.
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  • From NovaAlexandria on September 27, 2010
    The chapter itself was very interesting, as was the interaction between the two. Ishida was definitely a good choice to find Ichigo

    However, the chapter feels very rushed with a large number of sentence and spelling errors. So many I wouldn't know where to start.

    Still wanting to read the next chapter to see where it goes.
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  • From toujourseveille on September 26, 2010
    ...I await your interpretation of Uryuu's reaction with much anticipation.

    And have a mini-applause for the apt depiction of the MALE rape victim mentality. I got a feel for the gender-role conflict, here.
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  • From NovaAlexandria on September 24, 2010
    This was really good as a story and I do hope the TBC means more is comming. It would be interesting if the next meeting has Ichigo's hollow side return the favor, which is what I kind of feel, and hoping, is likely to happen with the title.

    The only thing I can really think of to mention is that Grimmjow is the 6th Espada, not the 5th(that's Nnoitra).
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