Tease | By : honeyMellon Category: Bleach > Yaoi - Male/Male > Renji/Shuuhei Views: 1089 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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A very big thank you to the lovely liqiu03 and Cuzosu for the review on the original story! Cuzosu's comment inspired me to extend this story a little bit, so I slipped in a second chapter...for Renji's REVENGE! Without further ado, here's the second chapter of "Tease"!
Friday night at the local izakaya restaurant was pretty high up in Renji's list of favorite things to do. Tonight was just like any other; Ikkaku and Yumichika were the first ones to arrive, followed closely by Kira and Matsumoto. By the time Renji arrived, Ikkaku was already buzzed.
"Yo Renji!" The bald man called out heartily at the sight of his redheaded friend. "Here! Oi! Here!" Feeling embarrassed by the stares from other customers in the restaurant, Yumichika gave him a hard poke in the ribs, earning a loud yelp that ended up attracting even more people. "Man, you started without me," Renji grumbled playfully as he slumped down next to Ikkaku. He greeted the others with a nod. "Where's Hisagi-kun?" Matsumoto asked when she realized that Renji came alone. She raised an eyebrow with a look that conveyed an unspoken "uh oh I hope you guys are not fighting". Reading her thoughts, Renji chuckled and said, "Nah, he's just a freaking workaholic. Says he's behind by two days." He shook his head as he helped himself to a drink. Kira rolled his eyes and muttered, "Same excuse all the time. Seriously, you're spoiling him." "Yeah!" chirped Ikkaku helpfully, "You shouldn't let him get away with it—hic!" Renji shrugged. "It's his choice, and I respect that, you know?" he said, looking indifferent. Kira raised an eyebrow. "Oh yeah?" The blonde did not believe it one bit. He peered at the redhead over his sake cup. Renji might respect Shuuhei's choice, but he sure didn't seem to like it very much even though he didn't say so. "You need to do something about this," Matsumoto chimed in and gave Renji a knowing wink. The redhead made a face. Oh come on guys, Renji thought miserably, it's not like I don't know it! He loved Shuuhei to death, but god sometimes he felt like strangling the man for putting work ahead of him. He knew Shuuhei didn't do it intentionally; this was simply how Shuuhei was. It was never a problem when he was single, and now he didn't realize how much his habit was affecting Renji. Encouraged by his friends, Renji decided that, yes, he did need to do something about this. Especially after Shuuhei tortured him like that the other night! And so the gears began to turn in his mind…it was time to hatch a plan…"I don't know about this," Shuuhei said, looking around apprehensively. "Why do we have to come here of all places?"
They stood in the locker room in one of the most popular public onsen in Soul Society. People bustled around them, all wearing the same light robe provided by the bath house. Some had obviously just gotten out of the water, their skin flushed and slightly wrinkled. The place was very busy, but that was expected since it was Saturday. "What are you talking about? Rangiku-san said this is the best one!" Renji said, raising his voice so that he could be heard over all the other voices around them. "How are we even going to find space in the bath?" Shuuhei asked in dismay when they stepped out from the locker room and into the bath area. Sure enough, it was so packed that people were practically sitting right next to each other, which could get kind of awkward since everyone's naked. Nope, Shuuhei did not like the idea of being squashed between naked strangers. "Oh come on, what's the big deal?" Renji chided. Before Shuuhei could protest, he found himself dragged to the nearest tub. "Excuse me!" Renji announced loudly as he squeezed himself between two bathers, pulling Shuuhei with him. The redhead looked unperturbed by the dirty looks he was getting from the people he had shoved aside, while Shuuhei bowed his head repeatedly in apology. "What are you doing!" Shuuhei hissed in Renji's ear. "That was so rude!" He felt his left arm brush against the stranger next to him, and he cringed, only to end up bumping his foot on the man's foot. "Sorry!" The man gave him a toothy grin and Shuuhei felt all the more uncomfortable. "Relax, Shuuhei," Renji said, wrapping an arm over Shuuhei's shoulders. "Ahhhh… This is so comfortable!" He leaned back against the side of the tub and sighed. Shuuhei gritted his teeth and tried his best to relax. But how could he? He wasn't used to being naked around so many people, much less around so many naked people! He pressed himself closer against Renji, taking comfort in the familiar warmth of his lover. After fidgeting nervously in the water for a good ten minutes, Shuuhei finally felt relaxed enough to lean his head back. Much to his delight, the creep who had grinned at him earlier had left the bath, so now he had more space and could actually spread out his limbs a bit. Closing his eyes, he began to think that maybe this wasn't such a bad idea after all. His eyes flew open in alarm when he suddenly felt a crawling sensation on the back of his right thigh. Not wanting to make a scene, he tensed his muscles to stop himself from moving. He turned to his right to look at Renji, who had his eyes closed, his expression completely serene. What the hell? Shuuhei looked to his left. The young man on his left also had his eyes closed and was resting his head on the tub, looking as though he had fallen asleep. Shuuhei looked around at all the other bathers. Nothing seemed out of place. People were either talking softly to each other or simply relaxing on their own. He flinched when his right thigh was touched again; this time the touch lingered, and he could tell that it was from a hand. He stared at Renji through narrowed eyes. A pair of innocent-looking eyes looked back at him behind hooded lids. Then the corners of Renji's mouth curled up slightly. Shuuhei wanted to curse at Renji as the redhead continued to caress his thigh in the water, his expression unchanged except for a hint of a smile. Anyone looking at Renji would think he was simply enjoying the warmth of the onsen. Shuuhei tried to wriggle away, but ended up bumping into the young man on his left. Apologizing profusely, he grudgingly slid back to his original position next to Renji, who continued to stroke his thighs as though nothing was going on. "Renji!" Shuuhei hissed. He moved his leg away but Renji's soft caress suddenly became a strong grip. Shuuhei glared at Renji but the redhead merely smirked. Once he was certain that Shuuhei wasn't going to struggle anymore, Renji let go of Shuuhei's thigh and returned to the gentle stroking motions. "What are you doing?" Shuuhei whispered urgently. His lover's touches would've been much appreciated at any other time, but here? In public? He tried to push the redhead's hand away but his movements were once again limited by the lack of space around him. The young man on his left had already glared at him twice for moving around so much. In the end Shuuhei gave up and just slumped back against the tub. He felt Renji's hand snake over to the insides of his left thigh and began to slide up and down very slowly along the smooth skin. Shuuhei felt goosebumps rise on his own skin and he shuddered. Since Renji was only stroking his thighs, he finally relaxed. What the hell,he thought, nobody would see anyway. Then his eyes widened when he felt Renji's hand slowly move up towards his crotch. He turned around to glare at Renji, but the redhead had his eyes closed so he couldn't let out his frustration. Shuuhei gave Renji a small kick in the foot, but Renji ignored him and continued to move his hand stubbornly upward. "Renji!" Shuuhei hissed again, almost pleading this time. Heat was beginning to creep up his neck. How could Renji do this in public? This was so…shameful! He felt the hand stop, and he sighed out loud in relief. And then suddenly Renji's fingers wrapped around Shuuhei's sensitive organ. Stifling a groan, Shuuhei closed his eyes and tried to breathe normally. The hand now lovingly massaged his package, the movements slow and gentle. The touch, combined with the soothing warmth from the water, was beginning to get to Shuuhei. To his horror, he felt himself harden. Shit! Shuuhei was frantic. He willed himself to soften, but this was one of those things that you just could not control in a situation like this. Renji's hand continued its merciless attack, kneading Shuuhei's sack and occasionally stroking his length. Shuuhei bit his lip to refrain from screaming. He never realized it was so difficult to keep silent! He stole guilty glances at his fellow bathers. To his relief, nobody seemed to have noticed anything. "Stop!" Shuuhei whispered harshly in Renji's ear. Again, he was completely ignored. He reached out a finger to poke Renji in the ribs, but the redhead seemed unaffected. Shuuhei was in agony now. He was moaning and groaning loudly in his mind, and it was taking all of his will power to refrain from letting them escape his lips. His knees were beginning to feel weak. This felt so good. Oh god, he thought, shit, if I come in here… His face burned when he thought of that. He would probably just die of shame if that really happened. Surely Renji would not do that to him? He gave Renji a scared look only to get an innocent smile in return. Shuuhei had never felt such a strong urge to punch someone in the face before. Suddenly, Renji's hand let go of Shuuhei, and he sagged back in relief. His member was still throbbing, but at least it wouldn't get any worse now. He shot Renji a death glare. Someone was so getting his ass kicked tonight! Renji pulled himself up from the water, and instinctively Shuuhei moved to follow. Then he froze when he realized that he was still hard, and naked. Which meant that if he were to stand up right now, his erection would be proudly displayed for everyone to see. With a dejected sigh, he sat back down in the water to wait it out. He ended up having to spend another fifteen minutes in the water before he dared to move. Having Renji sit next to the tub watching him with a wicked smile did not help one bit. He was so aroused that it refused to soften for the longest time. Even when he finally got out of the water, he was sure that his face was so flushed that any idiot could guess what happened. As they hurriedly returned the robes and paid, Shuuhei continued to glare at Renji, but his mind kept replaying those touches—and in public, no less—and before long he was breathing hard again. Luckily he was dressed now and his loose robes could at least hide his problem temporarily. Renji glanced at Shuuhei as they left the bath house, he was beginning to feel that he might have overdid it this time. The raven-haired man had not said a word since he got out of the tub, even when they changed in the locker room. He chewed on his lower lip. Yes, he definitely crossed the line this time, he thought in dismay. Renji's mind was so occupied with worry that he bumped into Shuuhei, who had stopped walking. He lifted his head and realized with surprise that they had somehow gotten back to his quarters. Stealing another guilty glance at Shuuhei, Renji wordlessly opened the door and let his lover go in first. As he turned around to close the door, he suddenly found himself pinned against the door by a very frustrated, very pissed, and very aroused Shuuhei. Needless to say, Rikichi got quite an earful that night. ENDPoor Shuuhei! By the way, onsen is the Japanese word for "hot spring". I have no idea if a public bath house would ever get this crowded, but for this story let's just imagine that it does! xD
I like to cross reference my own stories, so if you felt a little confused reading the last sentence of the story, it's referring to my other short story, "Noisy Neighbor". Do check it out if you're interested! ;) Let me know what you think! :)While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
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