Pride | By : honeyMellon Category: Bleach > Yaoi - Male/Male > Renji/Shuuhei Views: 888 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Here comes the second chapter~ A big thanks to fallowell and Cuzosu for reviewing the first chapter! ^.^ This is a shorter chapter in comparison, I think I didn't do a good job managing the length of that first one, so I'm fixing that for the next ones.
Chapter 2
"Huh, thought you'd get home first," Shuuhei commented as Renji closed the door. Shuuhei had arrived at the redhead's quarters around two hours ago, thinking that they could spend some couple time together. Recently Renji had been complaining more and more about Shuuhei's work hours so he figured it would be a nice surprise to drop in tonight. Turned out Renji had to stay at work later than he did.
Throwing his tired body onto the bed, Renji grumbled loudly, "Kuchiki-taicho is out sick today so I had to do everything myself today! God I hate paperwork! And this year's new recruits suck! How did they even graduate from the academy? Hmph, back in our days-" His words were cut off by a snort of laughter from his lover. Shooting Shuuhei a glare, Renji asked, "What's so funny?" "Back in our days? Seriously, you sound like an old lady!" Shuuhei said between chuckles. He sat down next to Renji. "Here, sit up." Renji scooted up to Shuuhei, who lifted his arms and grabbed the redhead's shoulders. "Oh, owwww! Owww! Ohh...ahhhh..." Renji's yelps of pain were quickly replaced by contented sighs as Shuuhei massaged his shoulders and neck. Shuuhei leaned forward and pressed his forehead against the back of Renji's head, essentially burying his face into his lover's ponytail. "Mmmm...you should just retire and become a masseur," Renji murmured, leaning his head back. "Ohhh...oww...ooooh right there...no waitowwww!" "Sorry..." Shuuhei whispered sheepishly. "God, what the hell happened to you? Your muscles are all bunched up!" He continued to knead around the stiff areas on Renji's back. Renji groaned, half in pain half in pleasure. "We're getting old..." "Oh ho, speak for yourself mister!" Shuuhei pressed down extra hard, earning another yelp of pain from the redhead. Then he lifted his fingers to lightly trace up and down his lover's neck, watching the tiny goosebumps that followed. He leaned over and licked Renji's neck, sending a shudder through the redhead. "Mmmm..." Turning around, Renji gently took Shuuhei's chin and pulled him close for a kiss. Shuuhei kissed back passionately, his hands left Renji's shoulders and wrapped around Renji's waist. "Who's the stupid horny bastard now?" Even in the heat of the moment, Renji could not resist poking fun at Shuuhei. In response, Shuuhei playfully bit down on Renji's lower lip, which drove the redhead into a sudden frenzy. He shoved Shuuhei onto the bed and roughly pulled up the man's arms over his head. Pinning Shuuhei's wrists together with one hand, Renji used his free hand to grab Shuuhei's dark hair in his fist, then with a low growl he pressed his lips against Shuuhei's. Eyes wide in surprise, Shuuhei hesitated for a split second, then allowed himself to relax and melt into Renji's passion. "Playing rough?" Shuuhei mumbled when Renji finally broke the kiss. He stared up at his lover's flushed face. Renji's eyes burned with desire, his breathes shallow and quick. Shuuhei's heart sped up as he watched Renji started disrobing almost frantically. "Oi...slow down, I'm not going anywhere-oommph!" His words were silenced by Renji's lips, and he felt a tight grip on his wrists, which were still positioned on the bed above his head. Shuuhei's heart raced when he felt himself being enveloped by Renji's body heat. The redhead was acting as if he had suddenly become an animal in heat, hungry and frustrated, and Shuuhei was his prey. Renji's body rubbed against Shuuhei's arousal almost painfully, sending shivers of delight down the raven-haired man's spine. "Hey! Slow down!" Shuuhei's yelps were ignored as Renji continued to attack his neck, his collarbone, his chest... Shuuhei's clothes were literally ripped off his body by Renji's teeth. "Oi!" Shuuhei squirmed in protest, but his squirming simply provoked his lover's lust even further, and Renji bit down on Shuuhei's neck. Shuuhei clenched his eyes shut and bit his lower lip at the sensation that bordered between pain and pleasure. Still, a groan of pain managed to escape his lips. "Oh my god..." Renji gasped as he suddenly felt the unique metallic taste of blood on his tongue. He snapped out of his frenzied state and ran his fingers gingerly over the bite wound on Shuuhei's neck, horrified at what happened. Shuuhei stared up at him from the bed somewhat accusingly, but he was also panting in excitement. They had never had such rough sex before, and somehow Shuuhei found this more arousing than ever. The raven-haired man frowned when Renji continued to stroke his neck wound gently while sporting a really guilty look on his face. "This is nothing, come on," Shuuhei said, wanting to continue. Renji gave him a pained look. "Shuuhei I'm so sorry...I don't know what got into me, I'm so sorry!" "Don't apologize, I'm not hurt...come on," Shuuhei hissed as his erection throbbed in need. When his lover showed no response other than looking at him like a sad puppy, Shuuhei lost it. He sat up suddenly and knocked Renji down onto the bed. Grasping both of Renji's shoulders and pinning him to the sheets, Shuuhei straddled the redhead's hips. Panting softly, the two men simply stared at each other, saying nothing. The room was so silent that Rikichi was probably sighing in relief next door, thinking that tonight's free show was over. Unfortunately for Renji's neighbor, the game had just begun. "Here, now we're even," Shuuhei whispered before biting down on Renji's neck, not hard enough to draw blood but definitely hard enough to leave a mark. He heard a loud gasp from his lover and gave a hard thrust with his hips, turning the gasp into a moan. He continued to nibble along Renji's neck while grinding their erections together, knowing how the man liked that sensation. Renji bucked his hips to increase the friction, causing Shuuhei to groan out loud. "That's it, I can't take it anymore," Shuuhei growled. "Get...get the tube, hurry..." He lifted himself up to let Renji lean over to his bedside drawer. When Renji retrieved the lube, Shuuhei commanded, "Put it on for me." Probably still feeling guilty for what he did earlier, Renji complied without a word. Squeezing out a good amount, he slathered Shuuhei's length liberally. The slimy liquid slid down and pooled on Renji's crotch, the sudden cool sensation from the liquid caused him to shudder slightly. Eyes tightly shut, Shuuhei groaned in pleasure when he felt Renji's fingers on his throbbing hot flesh. Once Renji was done, Shuuhei spread Renji's legs apart and hooked his arm under the redhead's knees. He gave a rough tug, and Renji slid down a bit on the bed until his butt pressed firmly against Shuuhei. Knowing what was coming next, Renji propped himself up on his elbows. He didn't know if it was weird, but he loved seeing Shuuhei enter him. Witnessing Shuuhei slowly burying his length into his own body was sometimes so arousing that he could come right then and there. But Renji had a personal policy that he would not enjoy his own release before his lover had had his, so he always restrained himself. Today, however, he did not get the chance to see the process clearly. With a hard thrust, Shuuhei rammed all the way home, fully sheathing himself in Renji's body in a single stroke. Caught off guard, Renji let out a scream of pain and collapsed onto his back. He felt as though his body was on fire, and before he even had the chance to get used to the pressure inside, Shuuhei began to pound, so hard that the bed shook. "Oh god, Shuuhei...what the fuck...ohhhh...oh god...oh god oh god...ungh..." Renji went from protesting to blabbering as the pain quickly gave way to intense pleasure. He saw stars and seriously thought he was going to black out. Meanwhile, Shuuhei's pants were getting quicker and louder, with the occasional grunts thrown in between. He had completely lost himself in the tightness of his lover. But even so, he didn't forget to reach down to tend to Renji's need. Renji's flesh felt so hot to the touch that Shuuhei hissed in surprise. For a few seconds his long fingers lovingly caressed the bumps and veins on the delicate organ, then he closed his fist around it and started pumping, slowly increasing the pace to match his thrusts. "Shuuhei! Oh shit, oh god...fuck!" Renji gasped in shock when he was suddenly hit by the strongest orgasm in his life yet. He bit his lip in an attempt to muffle his screams, but they still echoed around the room. He clutched the sheets so tightly that he thought the fabric was going to tear, and he could feel tears beginning to flow down the sides of his face. Seeing his lover like this pushed Shuuhei over the edge and he grasped Renji's thighs until his knuckles went white. He didn't remember making any sounds but the voice yelling Renji's name was suspiciously familiar in his ears. Sobbing, his head went limp, but he felt himself continue to pulse inside his lover. So he simply knelt there, still holding Renji's knees, and let his breath gradually calm down. Once he felt himself finally soften, he gently pulled out and crawled slowly up to Renji's side. "Still alive?" Shuuhei whispered as he draped an arm over his lover, who was still heaving. Nodding his head weakly, Renji gave him a crooked smile. For a moment the room was completely silent. "I...I don't think I can walk tomorrow..." Renji said finally, his voice hoarse from screaming. Both men started chuckling, and then burst out laughing until they got stitches on their sides.On the other side of the wall, Rikichi lay curled in a ball under the covers. The thin fabric did nothing to block out the sounds from his neighbor's room, and Rikichi thought he was going to go mad. He closed his eyes and tried to breathe normally, then slowly lifted his right hand from the sticky mess in his crotch. Shit. Shit shit shit. Kicking his blanket aside with a groan, he got up on wobbly legs and stumbled to the bathroom to clean himself.
Further away, at the Kuchiki mansion, a pair of tired eyes stared, unblinking, at the ceiling. Byakuya had been trying to sleep but his mind refused to give him the rest he needed badly. White...bandana...new..special... Hisagi... The words repeated over and over again in his mind. His face was burning up from a fever; his temperature had not decreased over the day, and now he felt so weak that he could hardly lift his head off the pillows. The blanket made him feel like he was in an oven, but without them he felt so cold that his teeth chattered. A weak groan escaped the lips, much to the owner's dismay. He hated his body for being so useless. With a frustrated sigh, Byakuya clenched his eyes closed, determined to get some rest.
As dawn gradually broke, the Kuchiki heir finally drifted off to sleep...Serves Rikichi right for spreading the rumors right? The guy can probably make a living off selling audio tapes of their nightly shows. ;) I know I'd buy 'em!
So I thought the dividers in the first chapter was a bit much...too thick perhaps? What do you guys think? Which format is better, line dot dot dot line, or just line? Hope to see you again soon~While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
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