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January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Oh clever writing does so put me in good spirits. I saved reading this story of yours for a rainy day and I'm sure glad that I did!
I like the initial concept of this story, soul versus flesh (always a thoughtful concept). Mislabeling...if I had a kidney for each time I've been mislead by mislabeling (there's a reason why those words' prefixes are the same!) at my hand or someone else's I would have far too many kidneys. *goes to fetch a large bin for her collection*
Poor unaware shinigami. Clever concept about trapping the soul in the body. What a simple and wonderfully gory tribute to the zombie concept (one bite started it all).
Leave it to Urahara to tease the young-lings with his spooky stories! Ichigo, Renji and Rukia fussing at each other and Urahara made me chuckle. I do so enjoy that term "spitfire". Then we have Ichigo and Urahara scamper off in the end, how cute.
I must say starting the story out with the story being told in the story added to the thrill. Me likie very much! What a fun oneshot. :3
I like the initial concept of this story, soul versus flesh (always a thoughtful concept). Mislabeling...if I had a kidney for each time I've been mislead by mislabeling (there's a reason why those words' prefixes are the same!) at my hand or someone else's I would have far too many kidneys. *goes to fetch a large bin for her collection*
Poor unaware shinigami. Clever concept about trapping the soul in the body. What a simple and wonderfully gory tribute to the zombie concept (one bite started it all).
Leave it to Urahara to tease the young-lings with his spooky stories! Ichigo, Renji and Rukia fussing at each other and Urahara made me chuckle. I do so enjoy that term "spitfire". Then we have Ichigo and Urahara scamper off in the end, how cute.
I must say starting the story out with the story being told in the story added to the thrill. Me likie very much! What a fun oneshot. :3
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October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That story truly had me feeling anxious. Good job.