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October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so now the impending food fight has me thinking of fun between the two of them :). Excellent as always!
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been giving this story a quick read, and it's enjoyable, but I have to point out something that's been bothering me about it. The title is misspelled. It should read 'A Beneficial Arrangement', rather than 'Benficial'. I could see it spelled that way if the story contained a character named 'Ben' and you meant the title to be a play on words, but as it is, I think it's just an ommission of the second, necessary 'e' in the word 'Beneficial'. You might want to correct this, thanks :-)
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely. I can't wait for more! Bya is so adorable in love :).
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... talk about tear jerker but in a beautiful way.....
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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I particularly like the last bit with the two of them in her room. Very poignant.
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September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I want to know more now :). Lovely work Phoenix, as always.
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens again! I like Inari's protective instincts. I can't wait to see what happens when they both realize they are hearing music together. More please!
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How the hell did I miss two chapters getting uploaded???
*smirks* the plot deepens and so does the feelings even if they are unsure of those feelings. *snickers* Bya's family isn't gonna know what hit them....
*smirks* the plot deepens and so does the feelings even if they are unsure of those feelings. *snickers* Bya's family isn't gonna know what hit them....
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You keep writing and I'll do my damndest to review *grins* You're my favorite dealer for the pretty boy fix, darling.
*grins* and the conspiracies start.....
*grins* and the conspiracies start.....
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More! I love where you're going with this, and I want to see what happens to the couple (as well as the mystery :) ).