rate_review Reviews

Love this story and I loved this chapter. Great pairing by the way. I was kind of expecting it to be Taksuki for some reason and I was right. I had started to read this on fanfiction and when I read that you had it posted here I decided to come to this site to read more. I was surprised to find that this one as a lot more action and is not just centered around Karin and Grimmjow. I am a HitsuKarin lover but this story just blows my mind. I was looking for a fic that wasn't HitsuKarin and the. I just fell in love with this one. I can't wait to read more of this story.

I'm a big fan of this story, and I enjoy reading chapters on a regular basis, but this is my first time reviewing a new chapter. And the reason I am is because of this suprise paining you just introduced. If you had come to me and said: "How about a Tesla/Tatsuki pairing?", I'd have called you crazy. But the way they met, how things just... Came together, makes it a pretty cool plot device. I always liked how you portrayed Telsa anyways, with the whole "Borderline Gynophobia" thing, and am glad to see him more involved. I give this chapter 5/5 man (girl, whatever, its just how I talk), and am really looking forward to the next one.

Frankly, unless he has a very important role to play in your story it would've been much better to let Ichigo kill Szayel, I still haven't forgotten what he did to Renji, and what he allowed Renji to do to Byakuya. That makes him imminently disposable no matter how Karin feels about him. Of course, having gotten that off of my chest, I'll just sit back and follow along after you.

Oh gwad, chibi Szayel...that...is...just...epic. I don't know whether to feel sorry for him or laugh out loud, or both *wipes away tears* XD Ooooh I can't wait for the next chapter~~*squirms*

Tatsuki and.....Tesra? That is a crack pairing I absolutely so did not see coming *comically deadpans* Truthfully I thought about Starrk, but....Tesra? ...My brain's still trying to wrap around it...

Lots of <3 and Thank yous to you and your bf!!!!!!!!! Amazing 4 chapters and I'm happy for TesraXTatsuki pairing! I was wondering if she was gonna get some love. I also totally forgot about Ichigo and Rukia! That what I love about your story, I mean don't get me wrong Rukia and Ichigo are great but its nice to see more of the minor characters like Tatsuki and Karin. Again great chapter and I'll have to wait patiently for the next update since you kindly updated 4 chapters! :D

To the dear boyfriend of the author.... :D .....thanks so much for talking her into posting all four of these recent chapters at once!! It's been wonderful reading the entire 'scene' and not having to wait for updates (not that you make us wait very long anyway, but you get what I mean!) :)

Really love this story and just normally do the 'ratings' and not review....but really felt the need to show mah love and appreciation to boyfriend after being prompted twice. LOL

Can't wait for the next chapter! (as always!) And I LOVE the idea of Tatsuki and Tesra!! She does need to be claimed for her safety, and he won't mistreat her in any way. It's funny to think that a "kind/innocent and sweet" arrancar exists, but Tesra definitely fits the description. I'm glad Tatsuki was the one to initiate the request, as it makes the whole thing that much cuter! Perhaps she will have to guide him through the rest, too..... *snickers*

Keep up the great job!

Poor little Szayel ... Literally ... Wonder if Karin might have to convince Grimmjow and Starrk to let chibi Szayel stay in Karin's care until he can be made a grown up again. At least Grimmjow would have a full arrancar 'son' to teach and cuff upside the head ...

Glomp and thanks for getting her to post another chapter so soon ... Squeeeeeeee

Yammy might be caring when Byakuya is seriously injured but he's still a serious bas*ard most of the time. I do wonder what he talked to Szayel about that Byakuya tuned out.

Squeeeeeee glomp ... Thanks again for a quickly posted chapter.

Sigh ... Was so hoping to see Szayel and Tatsuki have a little trist ... In the interest of science of course...but maybe if Ulquiora agrees to let Tesra claim Tatsuki and Szayel gets to be his older self once more ... A monitoring agreement might be reached to see if Tatsuki will get pregnant relatively soon too. Of course the fact that Tatsuki is wanting to submit to the claim and the fact that the stress levels in that pairing could also support the theory that high stress is part of the problem with conception rates. I guess that if I can't get the pairing I was hoping for then this one is a very close second and I'm sure Orahime will do her best to 'persuade' Ulquiora to give in to Tatsuki's request with the underlying hint that if Tesra ever does anything that seriously upsets Tatsuki .... Well Ulquiora can always 'discuss' the situation with Tesra in a way to placate both girls, and Nnoitra would probably have little say in the situations since Tatsuki technically is still Ulquiora's property. Can't see Tesra mistreating Tatsuki in any way though ... He'd probably be more likely to castrate anyone who upset her than allow any harm to come to her. It would be great if Tatsuki and Rangeku both went through pregnancy together ... And Tesra and Nnoitra being anxious daddies together.

Oh and .... Thank you ... Thank you ... Thank you .... Glomp squeeeeeeee

Damn stubborn Kurosakis! Now we have to wait to know whats going on. *pout*

I think I understand wait Kuchki elders are talking about but is it going to be Byakuya's kid or Yami's? Its most likely Byakuya's I guess since the elders probably want a blood heir, and the fact that Arancar have difficulty breeding.

So that is the secret pairing you were talking about! I am both surprised and tickled! Lol! Tatsuki is rather forward!