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Now I see what happened to poor Renji. I kind of wish Szayel would get some more torture for being such a bastard and destroying his zanpakuto. I almost forgot about Renji, sigh. =/

A bit of randomness here but, all I want is to see Byakuya brutally killing Yammy, hopefully that will happen. *dreams with opened eyes*

Good chapter.

Interesting, Nnoitra still thinks of Nel from time to time, doesn't he? I wonder if it's foreshadowing.

I recall that Metastacia destroyed Kaien's zanpakuto in cannon and he didn't turn into a mindless zombie. In fact he was as about as far from it once he got over the initial shock.

I don't mean to pry into your private life but shouldn't you and your boyfriend get married first before having children?

Terrific chapter! The emotional reunion of sword and warrior was wonderful to see! My heart is just broken for Renji. I was just thinking that Szayel had suffered enough and then thought not just yet after what he did to Renji. This might be one of those things that is not forgivable. Can't wait for more!

Love the chapter ... Everyone was so happy to get their weapon back ... Except poor Renji (hope that can be 'fixed' soon ... And Szayel is suitably regretful and apologetic to Renji for what he did ... I believe he honestly had no idea how seriously Renji would be hurt and even he should feel bad about that to a degree). Hmmm gotta wonder just how much Nnoitra is willing to do to keep Rangeku 'thanking' him like that ... who knows, she might get him trained yet.

Hmmm ... I'd love to see someone find and destroy Aisen's Zanpakto without him realizing it was found until way too late.

Even if more babies aren't planned as of this time I'd like to request consideration of a baby for Rangeku now that Nnoitra has found a possible aphrodisiac to get more between the sheets action with Rangeku (it would be nice to have one successful Shinigami-Arrancar conception ... I know that Tatsuki stands a better chance of mommy-dom because she's human and piggies (like Tesra) are notorious for being horny with stamina to match but ...)

Hmmm ... How would I want a half arrancar baby to look? Depends on the arrancar half ... But I'll say I'd like it to be adorable cute at any rate.

Finally … after 59 chapters and one child Grimmjow had admitted his feelings. Still I know that if it had been sooner, it would have sounded strange. The timing was perfect -_-
And yet … it was so sweet! <3 <3

You know I was rereading the story and I realized something. So many things had happened and yet I think so many are just at their begging. Orihime and her child, the role Hana will play in your story …
Every chapter keeps me guessing.
I think your story deserves more reviews, but I’m sure there are some readers that check your story weekly without giving you a feedback. Maybe they are too shy :)

I hope this time it will be the whole message … let’s pray

Finally … after 59 chapters and one child Grimmjow had admitted his feelings. Still I know that if it had been sooner, it would have sounded strange. The timing was perfect -_-
And yet … it was so sweet! <3 <3

You know I was rereading the story and I realized something. So many things had happened and yet I think so many are just at their begging. Orihime and her child, the role Hana will play in your story …
Every chapter keeps me guessing.
I think your story deserves more reviews, but I’m sure there are some readers that check your story weekly without giving you a feedback. Maybe they are too shy :)

You know I was rereading the story and I realized something. So many things had happened and yet I think so many are just at their begging. Orihime and her child, the role Hana will play in your story …
Every chapter keeps me guessing.
I think your story deserves more reviews, but I’m sure there are some readers that check your story weekly without giving you a feedback. Maybe they are too shy :)

Awwww! I really adored this whole chapter. Nicely done!!

The 'I love you' ending was absolutely perfect and Orihime finding out she was pregnant was very sweet.

Your A/N: Personally, I'm sorry to hear about more 'Szayel punishment' to come and hope it's not as harsh or traumatizing as the last time. That last chapter really had me feeling horrible for him! And........my guess is that the 'almighty' Aizen should be feeling confident enough by now to give everyone's Zanpakutou back to them.

"Banged up"??? Don't you mean "knocked up"??! XD

I never heard of "banged up" to mean anything other than "beat up". But I looked up the phrase "knocked up" and found out that the word knock is an archaic slang for sex much like the word bang is used today. (Hence why banged up might be a variation of knocked up.) It is also interesting to note that the phrase is about 200 years old and no one knows for certain where the "up" part of the phrase originated. It is interesting to note that there were also 2 other uses of that phrase at one time. A rare use was to describe an inanimate object being beating up or worn out (pregnant women are easily tired) and the more common term is to wake someone up at a certain time by knocking on their door (mainly before alarm clocks were invented). My best guess this started out as a joke about someone's affair.

Now that we're on the subject of getting knocked up I noticed that a lot of your readers are hoping Tatsuki and Tesla (sorry I watch the dub) have condom failure. I can see an increased risk of the overflow/slippage problem if Tesla's base hollow form causes him to have longer well you know... Personally I'm kind of on the sideline on this issue. On one hand having a kid might help Tesla become more assertive but on the other that could be one ugly baby. Seriously those happy thoughts/dreams Orihime had of what her baby might look like would probably be some of Tatsuki's worst nightmares if she ever sees what Tesla looks like in his release form.