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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN...
This was...not my norm, to be sure. Not sure what I expected, but it wasn't this.
I...liked it, becasue it was well-written, grabbed my attention immediatly and didn't let go, and becasue you made it agonizingly wasy to emphsize with and pity Shuhei.
A tragic and wholly engrossing tale, and one that I'm glad I read. I hope you continue to post work here, you have serious talent.
This was...not my norm, to be sure. Not sure what I expected, but it wasn't this.
I...liked it, becasue it was well-written, grabbed my attention immediatly and didn't let go, and becasue you made it agonizingly wasy to emphsize with and pity Shuhei.
A tragic and wholly engrossing tale, and one that I'm glad I read. I hope you continue to post work here, you have serious talent.
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write another story for this as I would love to see what Jushiro does with Shuhie. Loved the 2 connected stories.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
T_T I hate seeing Shuuhei suffer, but this story was well written. I liked that you had Ukitake come at the end. He's such a sweetie. <3