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for Kaleidoscope

by severuslover

person oChaoticDarlingo
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Youuu shoulddd continue this. :] My interest. T'is piqued.
Yay Byakuya/Renji!
person B
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's so awesome :D A great, original idea for a fanfic, written really well. I'll be waiting for more~!
person pasc55
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wooh i love teh beginning of this story!!!
i want to read the contuinued!
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol hearing Renji say "Kuchiki taicho" is so normal, it's like he was meant to say it rofl
person qwerty
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting start
keep going!
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting start; more than interesting enough for her to look out for an update.

A few jumps and starts in the writing; sometimes you get a little carried away with what you're saying and forget to articulate properly, resulting in a vague or confusing sentence or paragraph.

However, overall it was a light, fast paced style that was very engaging and enjoyable.

She'll definitely be looking for an update.
person Bunnybop05
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update my mistress

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