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by Rockyshores

person ShadowofLight
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I like the second chapter, makes me like the public school more and wishing the "Perfect" school and those students would die in a horrific fire, with flesh eating leeches in the toliets--oh and to have the skin from their faces ripped out and then having their bleeding faces shoved in a giant pot of salt and fire ants! *grins evilly* Sorry I really hate people like that and I get really upset. Anyway this is good and I love how ichigo dealt with Grimmjaw. And I like the brief interaction of Shirokasi (so sorry if i spelled his name wrong). I'm liking this and wondering how it will all come to be.
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooo, fun fun fun. I wonder just how interesting his stay will be once they get their hands on him. heheheh. XD

A good slow development is good. I'm glad you're going that route. -nods- It's always a put off to see them just fall head over heels for everyone just like that then jump each others bones. Build up is very nice. ^.^

You're doing great so far, keep it up! I look forward to reading more.
person Tiramisu
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please put me on the mailing list for this fic - katgrrrrl99@yahoo.com
Thanks!!
person the1girlunevernoticed
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting. . .I like how you made it stand out from the other stories. It seems like it will be awesome!
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello^^ I already love this story, as any other that you've written XD To be honest, I don't write myself, I only registered to write a comment and let you know that your stories are the best Bleach stories I've ever read^^ /yay for uke Ichigo XD/ I'm anxiously waiting for an update of any of your fanfics, please keep up the good work ^ o^
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I cannot wait for more! Ichigo as the bitch of a harem? Delicious!

This world sounds interesting. I wonder where its going to go...all for Ichi's ass! Haha, I'd love to be added to the update list, cvhern @gmail.com. Thanks!
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know you are a good writer, but Hmmm... I donno, I have huge issues in the class system, and that may taint any review I do on this story. Out of curiosity why did you choose that concept.. if you dont mind me asking that is?
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo, this seems really interesting. I can't wait to see what transpires.
person Vera
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems like this idea has been brewing in your head for quite some time. Lucky us! Great work!

Can I be added to the update notification list? Mt e-mail: veronique_sheridan@hotmail.com
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, an interesting premise of class structure. I look forward to seeing where you take this. *grins*

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