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I almost forgot. I wanted to share this with you; it's not as detailed as I'd like but it will suffice and you can do your own research after. http://www.youngwomenshealth.org/hymen.html

It's astonishing how often young people think that a woman's hymen is something inside the vaginal track. It is also often thought to be something that is a complete barrier, which is also incorrect, and illogical if you think about it; how would a girl get her period if there was a barrier prohibiting the release of menstrual blood? I hope you don't take offence to this, just thought you might like to know :D

A nice well rounded chapter. Any chance of the rest of us seeing said picture?

NICE!!! As weird as it seemed, I think Rangiku and Grimmjow would make a good pair.

Keep up the updates as quick as you can (even if it takes awhile, I'll still read 'em)

YAY!!! FREEDOM!!! CRAP!!! Ichigo was so quick to stab him!

AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!! What happened to the chapter?!?! & what does 'Esclavo' mean?

I can really see what you are talking about...he is defineately alpha male. But still what a great way to save someone. Awesome story I look forward to more.

Where the heck is the rest of it!?!!! I don't mean to sound so demanding but my gosh this thing sucked me in and then just stopped!!! I love my Grimmy and I want more of this! Pretty please with chocolate chip cookies up top?

Well I think its doin gr8! Nice update.

I like the direction this is going and it really makes sence...I also like how you are keeping with the story line somewhat but with your own twist. Thank you for a good read.

Poor Rukia (but at least shes gettin Grimmjow's good stuff) Lets hope those "changes" are for the better.

Great writing!