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for The Loss Of One To Gain Another

by severuslover

schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chouu is such a bastard. bya-kun you will be a sexy and wanted call guy don't worry cheer up lol. what is the real relationship between ma-chan and chou? who is the boss between them?
person satterb
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I will be adding this delicious story to my list of must reads! Well written, apparently well planned. I appreciate how carefully you've fleshed out the characters. I think new/original characters are a lot of fun. Sticking with existing characters leaves you bound to a certain extent, only able to write around them. It's exciting to see the dynamics between these people before we are given any background...I've already decided whom I like, and whom I don't but of course, that may change as you begin to unfold the mysteries of what shapes these people. Excellent work! Looking forward to more. Thanks for all your hard work!
person Anise
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(2) I'm actually rather torn, my first reaction was 'no absolutely not, Byakuya is not a whore!' But then on the other hand I'm rather curious about Makoto and what he wants to do with him. It wouldn't be surprising though for them to have reservations about Byakuya, most people who pay for sex want someone willing and ready to do whatever they want. If someone just picks him for looks they might be in for a surprise when they get him alone. Maybe because of his good looks they can charge a large fee for him and he would only have a select group that could afford him, plus that could also play to his pride being just for a elite group. Other hand, they could just throw him in and hope he's broken of the pride - totally on the fence about all this ;) Just sheer curiosity (and the good writing :) will have me checking for updates, I can't what to see what happens next ^_^
person nivell
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOh please continue this! The image of Byakuya as a prostitute is pretty damn hot!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love the plot outline and this looks so promising. I do hope to see more soon.
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intersting story. I look forward to more.

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