rate_review Reviews

NICE ONE!!!!!!!!! ok you have to finish this now cause you really have me hooked. very well written. and a dekicious plot if I may say so myself.

You really have a way with words! I love it. Cant wait fro the next.

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So much better with the speech marks, lol! I really do enjoy this story, it's a very enjoyable read and you really seem to capture something about the characters' emotional states and personalities. I'm wondering if Uryu/Ichigo's plan might backfire though, lol. Look forward to more :)

xD I'm glad you put in the quotation marks..that was the only thing I didn't like about this story. Now it's really great!

I have to say this as it *really* annoyed me (especially as it is a brilliant story otherwise) but you have a total absence of speech marks. It means when you read a sentence like 'I knelt down to inspect his injuries. I don't see any blood' it really jars the reader because they're not sure what it speech and what isn't, what makes it worse is you have a first-person narration so you have to pay very close attention to tense changes to see when dialogue occurs. . . and reading that closely in one's spare time is a *little* bit of a chore.

On a brighter note! Your writing it very good and I greatly enjoyed it. The characters seem quite real and you progressed the plot at a good pace, it's well written and well - basically very good, lol. I look forward to more chapters, but please include speech marks! Great start though!

This story is getting good. Can't wait for the smut. XD

PLEASE put more chapters up! I love me some Izuru. ^o^