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for Eleven Seconds

by Platinumsabr

schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just gave it a quick read while waiting on one of my friends. I like it a lot, the interplay is well done, and you managed to keep them in character. I liked Tatsuki's insecurities about her figure, and the conflict between her inner tomboy and her womanly side.

I'll give it a more thorough read later. Keep it up.

-Casa
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I finally got around to creating an account here and yes, it was for the primary purpose of reviewing your stories ^_^ So here goes:

LOVED this oneshot!! I thought the alternate direction you took from the scene was plausible and that your continuation blended well with the action. The characterisations were spot-on and the emotions conveyed through your word choice were palpable- I felt like a voyeur! Details and descriptions were stylish and slick without being overdone and even the dialogue was hot! I was burning just reading this- nicely done! So glad you decided to write something else for this pair- definitely your forte. Now I'm inspired to put my lemon hat back on! Do keep up the impressive work!

Sincerely, Mira ^_^
person ardane1
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I'm glad you ventured back in to IchiTatsu territory. There aren't enough writers, especially good ones of that ship.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it (but then again, I always like your stuff)! Haha, I actually was missing some of the Ichigo/Tatsuki stuff (I went back to read some of my favorite parts of WTECS), so it was nice reading this.
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great one shot from you. Your able to write this pairing so believable and right for each other. Hope to see more from you soon. I like how you were able to write her showing feelings to Ichigo. That was nice in it's own right.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was awesome. This is what chapter 239 should have been.

You know I'm a sucker for Ichigo/Tatsuki so this was a pleasant surprise.

As usual the writing quality was top notch and I look forward to more (whether it be oneshot, ANW, or something completely different)

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