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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I liked it.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it :)
It was interesting, although I don't know Bleach.
You can build tension, you can draw the reader in.
/Just check your story for some minor mistakes like 'seems' -> 'seemed' and so on ;)/
It was interesting, although I don't know Bleach.
You can build tension, you can draw the reader in.
/Just check your story for some minor mistakes like 'seems' -> 'seemed' and so on ;)/
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful story! Lovely writing style you have there, and it was both sexy and emotional. Nice job!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I have seen this pairing. The whole feel of this fic was different and I enjoyed it, it is rare we see Orihime as the suducer. And the ending was good, I liked it.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad that this is a one shot as I think you created a very interesting dynamic between Orihime and Tosen. It was convincing and well written. Good work.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that was REALLY good. interesting pairing done very nicely. ^_^