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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person acmarache
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do enjoy these filler chapters just for the sake of the little things people do in them. Like Ichigo having a wet dream on Uryuu's couch.
person acmarache
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grimmjow is such a cute kitty. Isshin and Jyuushiro? Hah! I knew Jyuushiro wasn't so innocent! It's always the good ones you have to watch out for. If Jyuushiro has fooled everyone this long, then Shunsui doesn't have a chance in fooling him.
person Erin
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww this chpater was so so cute! I like the interraction between them all, this should be intresting! I look forward to seeing Kisuke in kendo practice! I wonder if him and Ichigo will meet again any time soon?
Lol, by the way, I loved Kisuke's line about calculating Pi, out to the 16th decimal! That is so so Kisuke isn't it?
Well done, and I look forward to reading what comes next!
person Darkephoenix
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And now for another rousing game of poke the kitty. Which is *almost* as much fun as playing poke the Suit. Hehehehe. Great work.
person Irana
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* Writing Demonstration frightens me too, so we're on the same wavelength there.

I cannot tell you how much I grin like a little girl every time I see Grimmjow and Shunsui interact. I get this little thrill of pleasure and my mouth smiles before I know it's going to move. And the nickname! *purrs in pleasure* Grimmjow would kill me, but "Kitten" is so very much the nickname I have in mind for him, and Shunsui calling him Kitty just makes my day. Guaranteed grin right there. I'm guessing this is the upcoming threesome that AJS won the prize for? because really, the way Shunsui and Grimm interact it could lead only one place, and with him being with Ukitake, well...

I was grinning through this entire chapter, it was brilliant!
person Irana
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Why don't you and I get our young friend some breakfast, Kitty Cat? Jyuushiro can keep an eye on Kisuke," purred Shunsui, his brown eyes sparkling with merriment. Eeeeee! *happy squee*

This chapter? Wow. *Utterly speechless other than that*

BTW, thanks for reading and commenting on demonstration.
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm...are you going to pair Shunsui together with Grimmjow?
person AJS
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mommy!Grimmjow is just so CUTE!! *sparkly eyes*.

Congradulations on your victory over the writer's block! It's nice to see your work again. This was a very nice chapter - it's interesting to see how - how capable Kisuke is when he's not running on fear and anger. It's interesting to see the boy without the shadow of the Captain looming behind him. And, of course, teh smut was hwt *drools*. My current guess for the threesome is Jyn/Shun/Grim - but then again, I could be mistaken. For some reason, the thought of Grim and Yourichi meeting fills me with shudders - two kitties in the same room?

It's interesting, seeing Kisuke's interestiong with his past self(s). I'd think he'd get on much better with Hat-and-Clogs; the two of them are much more ocmpatable. But - its interesting, seeing his relationship with the Captain. You know, if the two of them ever teamed up - worked together - they'd be something to see. And a face-to-face confrontation - any plans for Kisuke to enter his inner world any time soon? ("There's THREE of me?!" "Four, if you count Benehime." "Who?" *Sigh*.)
person Erin
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW!I loved this chapter so so so much, it was amazing! I loved seeing any kind of interaction between Kisuke and Ichigo before the story,and before all the trouble. The amount of trust that they show in each other here is so beautiful. Does that mean that Kon knew from then then? Wow, he kept a secret huh lol?
The end was really cute as! I am glad that you were able to get over your writers block, and I look forward to seeing what happend next!
Thanks for writing ^_^
person Seori
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!LOL!!!LOL!!!LOL!!! Leave it to Shunsui to call Grimmjow Kitty Cat. LOL!!! Thank you for the update!!

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