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Arghhh *nosebleed*
Ichi!! Give Bya-kun a chance, give him a chance!!!
I want Bya-kun to do those things to Ichi.. drool. x3
Can't wait for the next chapter, but I'll try to be patient~!

Oh! No no, nothing about being iffy for your own characters! Believe me! They are great! Seriously I'm turning to a huge fan of Lily and Night! They make me laugh!! It was funny to see Lily hit that way Night, cute cute!! They relation is so prominsing and funny to read! hihihi!! Your story is incredibly captivating! I like the way Ichigo and Lily treat each other, they're like little brothers, so adorable! *O* I was literally drooling when it come that kiss Byakuya gave to Ichigo! This is going to be interesting, I mean, if they start living together, sure Byakuya will be always overprotecting the cute strawberry xDD! Byakuya's past its sad! All he passed through about killing his own mother =( there is much more to know about him and his past, well, I guess. =P!

Thanks for the update!! I'm looking forward to the next chap! Sorry if I extend myself too much commenting, I just can help it! ^//^

PD: You're such a wonderful writer!

Ichi is so stubborn, really here you have a man taking you out of hell and you want to run away, but I understand it was because he was confused. I am so sorry for Byakuya's past, having to kill your own mom thats crazy, those people he works for are really sick bastard, but I have so much more respect for him over the fact that he is sane and hasn't lost his mind by now. The way he feels about Ichigo is so sweet, but really he should start caring more about Lily after all he is Ichigo's best friend. From your description and the name it is not hard to see how Night would mistake Lily for being male. I think those two make a good couple by the way I don't think things would be boring with these two pairings. And Ichigo just has to just has to give him a chance if he doesn't who else is going to tame the "beast." You know hearing all that dirty talk from Byakuya just reminded me that we get to have all the hot smutty Byakuya/Ichigo scenes that we had in Forbidden Kiss, I am so looking forward to it. And hey you should do one of Night and Lily too it would be an interesting contrast to Bya/Ichi sex.

Oh I want to read more!!!! Wow all that disturbing stuff, glad I'm used to my friends saying disturbing things XD

Aah a new fic by you, I really like this one it looks like it is going to be better than the last one with Bya/Ichi which was good by the way. I love AU and the idea behind this. I also like Byakuya's character the way he was so possesive over Ichigo was cute. On top of that the OC are nice as well. I look forward to the next chapter.

Very interesting story and I would love to see more. Update soon

very nice so far

All I can say is I'm loving this story. I love the idea. I love how it's written. I just love it. ^^ I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. And I must admit that the john with the 'daddy' obsession disturbed me slightly at the peeing part. o.O; Of course, having had the conversations i've had....that's perfectly normal. I salute you for having something like that included. XD heh Anyways, keep up the great work! ^o^

[chanting]
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Oh! I'm so happy that I found this story. It do have a excellent plot not to mention that Byakuya/Ichigo it's one of my favorites couples. I'm not a big fan of fictions with personals character, but somehow I do like Lily and the friend of Byakuya. They're a cute! specially Lily. Lol. I'm anxious to read what's going to happen y the next chapter! Please, when you have the time, update soon! Anyway I'll be around here waiting! ^o^

PD: Sorry for my bad english, but I'm from a different country... so I hope you understand. =(

Saludos! (My greetings!) ^^