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for Happy Ending

by MibuWolf

person UlquiorraLoverandGrimmKittyStalker
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
We have to say that this story is absolutely amazing! The way you portrayed each character was so suiting! We love Byakuya!

Please do continue this, we would hate to not see another chapter!
You are a very talented author, and quite frankly, this story is original, not to mention interesting.

UlquiorraLover: Please do continue this story, for I do find it quite invigorating. The final scene of chapter two where Byakuya was describing his lustful wishes was, for lack of better words, fangirl-material. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Yours sincerely,

UlquiorraLover and GrimmKittyStalker
person cagna4
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more. more. more. please update soon. sorry i can't give you any flames to roast marshmellows on but i can give you the marshmellows. here's some cookies if you get no flames to roast the marshmellows though. enjoy.
person kunitsu
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh nice I found this agian. Nice 3rd chapter, the way Byakuya talked to Ichigo seemed so sensual. For some reason Night reminds me of Renji, he isnt Renji is he
person voyuerer
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story, so much fun.
person =^-^=
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
. . . . . . wow . . . . doesn't What's his name seem a little off his rocker near the end of your last chapter? Poor Itchi-chan!!!!! Half fucking horny and half scared shitless! LOL
person sllee989
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. And it's Byakuya/Ichigo too!!
Too bad chibi!Byakuya had to kill his mom.
They both have such a bad past...baggage much?
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! KILL the Evil Cliffhanger!! Kill!! Love ya story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing... is some of the best.
You're creative and imaginative and controlled. And my adjectives could potentially keep going... but I'll save them for later reviews.

Oh and Byakuya's character development = M-azing.

And so I sit. Awaiting your next bout of creativity and excellence.

=^_^=
person MachikoTakara
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way that you have created ichigo to be both fragile and strong

not many people can attempt such a combination and pull it off so well

i cant wait to read more
person Bittsweetmis
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Noes! poor Ichigo and Byakuya....those poor babies! Night sorta reminds me of Zack from Final Fantasy 7....at least how i picture him from the fanfics. I love the way you characterised Byakuya as well as the humour between Lily and Night. Are the other Bleach Characters gonna be included in this?

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