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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm.... I like this >=3
Little sketchy around the spellings - a good beta would sort that out though - and perhaps a little more fluency between paragraphs. But its just finesse you lack, the ideas are good!!!
And by god I will support anyone who doesn't just gog for typical mindless pairings!!
Though perhaps a little too much of the L word for my liking *nods* but each to their own
Over all very nice.
Little sketchy around the spellings - a good beta would sort that out though - and perhaps a little more fluency between paragraphs. But its just finesse you lack, the ideas are good!!!
And by god I will support anyone who doesn't just gog for typical mindless pairings!!
Though perhaps a little too much of the L word for my liking *nods* but each to their own
Over all very nice.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa~! I'm so happy! I can't wait for it to come out. Hopefully soon ne? Very, very soon... =3
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Keep up the good work!
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good, you should continue this with Aizen it would definitely be interesting.
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm so speechless! This is fabulous! You should make a sequel! Please. please, please? Pretty please? *offers Ulquiorra, Ichigo and Aizen plushie*
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great and so hot ummmmmmm!!! lol are you going to make a part two? i hope you do.