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by debbiechan

person serpia
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! My two favorite characters together ^_^
Seriously, you made my day with this. I love your style of writing as well, it reads so smoothly. Keep up the awesomeness work ^_^
Serpia-chan
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I love this! Espically the line 'a murderer in her bed would be nothing new', what a great line. And the finsh was fantastic. I really like how you kept it hot with the imagery but the strong flavor that Mats is loney and dangerous is great.

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