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for His Heartbeat

by lechymonk

schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please! I really like this story!
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! Ukitake and Kyoraku are such an interesting pair, and I like to see more stories about them. Not that I don't like Ichigo, Orihime, etc., but it's nice to see some other characters get some love!

You also have one of the best OC's I've seen to date. She's real; she has flaws, insecurities, and human tendencies. Most OC's are either MarySues, superhuman, or just plain annoying. But your's is very well-written, and she is an enjoyable addition to the crew.

I can't wait to read more, and look forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the ending. Totally unexpected. I'm enjoying this story very much. Good work.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Love it Love it!!! It's been awhile since I've seen a good Ukitake story, I like Hinako too, great OC ^_^
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first chapter. Yummy!
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More yummy.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please. I like the rhythm of your writing and the passion.

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