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So cute! So sweet! I love it!

Even if you have no idea why you write them I'm glad you do

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this fic is soooooooooo awesome~!

Eeeee!!!! *GLOMP* That's so cute! Lol! I love it. :) I'm glad that my commenting can sometimes inspire. :p I can't wait until you write more. At least I hope you do! o.o;;

And you aren't a dork for writing these! They're cute and I love them! *huggle Yachiru and Zaraki*

Squeee!!! I love this, it's totally and utterly...*grin* awesome! The third chapter was hilarious and the fourth was just fucking cute. :p I love how you make Zaraki speak in his dialog. Hm. I wonder what would happen if Yachiru really did get sick, like Zaraki was afraid she would in the second chapter when he made her put on some more clothes. :)

Anyway, just a thought. I dunno how one would make a fic or anything out of it, but it was just a cute lil thought I've been having since I read chapter two. :p

Thanks for updating! Sorry it took me this long to notice! :p I've been on LJ a lot more lately. ^^;;;;

That made me laugh. Thanks.

Lol! I so totally love this, it's completely cute and, what's more, I can see it happening. I hope you write more chapters to this, it's totally something I would come back to the General section to read, even if there was nothing else here I was interested in. :)

Cute. That's all I can say.