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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very powerful writing and so good. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful truely wonderful *clapping is heard from behind the monitor* that was an angle i hadn't thought of in Kira's needs... now to get Af to understand it more *smile* ever the hero is the Lady of Creani
Thank you
Rysha of the silver woods and Afrieal
Thank you
Rysha of the silver woods and Afrieal
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! XD I think it was all very well written. It was just really great! ^^
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew it. I knew that the abuse Gin gave Kira would warp him, and that it would become his way of life. It was interesting to see Ikkaku being the weak one...and it's funny how even the most dutiful of lovers can fail in giving us not only what we need, but what we want. Dark Kira is interesting...if only he didn't play innocent all the time we might see more of him. Interesting P.O.V...and needless to say I loved it.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This did not suck. It's actually really good. I think it came out perfectly. I really want to see Kira's view now. See his guilt.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah! realy great! there isn'T anything more for me to say. hope to read one of your next magnificent storys soon. keep going sweetheart. ^^
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sad, very sad. Yes, the angst is there. Stream of consciousness is not easy to write, but i think you pulled it off and the explanation at the beginning helped. Evocative.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*slaps you*
It did NOT suck, how dare you. Your stories are always so thoughtful and delve into the character's psyche. I wondered while I was reading your other Kira/Ikkaku stories how he felt about abusing Kira and if he would ever do it if he was asked. Now I know. I'm glad to see he doesnt like it. Good job.
It did NOT suck, how dare you. Your stories are always so thoughtful and delve into the character's psyche. I wondered while I was reading your other Kira/Ikkaku stories how he felt about abusing Kira and if he would ever do it if he was asked. Now I know. I'm glad to see he doesnt like it. Good job.