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for Forbidden Kiss

by MibuWolf

person bcjink
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update pllllleeeeeaassse?!
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!
I suggest twins, two boys.
As for names;
Tamao and Tokio
person CrossMarian
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.o NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE :3 im not really good at the naming and the gender guessing X_X so w/e works works :\
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. It's been a long time sense the last one and I can't wait to find out what happens. Have decided what they are going to have? Like the idea of them having twins a boy and a girl, but thats just me. Well I hope that you update soon.
person liz2008
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story so far. please update soon. please have a single child. i love mpreg stories.
person nyge98
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait till the next chapter. regarding sex i was thinking twin boys named Ken (meaning strong) and Kenji (meaning intelligent second son)
person Lilo
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for Ichigo to become a mum and he needs to have twins lol update soon
person Yakumo
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh DAMN this is hot. Please write another chapter soon!
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Gawd damn, baby" <---WHAT THE HELL.

AM I SEEING A DIFFERENT BYAKUYA THAN YOU?

-_-;;

That aside, it was ok. It's annoying when a hot-headed character is turned into a weepy uke. But, what are you going to do? I was just glad to find some Byachi to read. I didn't end up finishing it, but your writing style was good. For some reason the line mentioned earlier ruined it for me. And the way you described Byakuya's, ahem, "male parts". It's better than "hot rod of love" I suppose. Continue writing; practice makes perfect (don't I know that -_-).
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...How dare it cut off my review...

*boils*

>> Arg. Anyway. Byakuya's WAAAAAY outta character. But the story was good, 3/5 from me.

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