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for The Cheese With the Beautiful Name

by debbiechan

schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I simply love your IshiHime fics! Wow, so well written... please do more on this couple, and more on ichiruki too.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this was the weirdest/cutest Uryuu/Orihime one-shot I've ever read. It fits her perfectly; why not talk about Velveeta during sex? I prefer alfredo myself... mmm...
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great one shot I loved it. Its a wonderful job you do of opening the story like the middle of a book and it feels totaly natural. Your story placement and use of back story/flashbacks was seamlessly woven and you do a great job pacing the tempo of the story's flow. I liked the sweetness of Hime's character mixed with a somewhat raw and ranchy use of vocab, the mix really brought out the heat and sexyness of this story. I really liked reading this and will enjoy rereading it the future.

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