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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This...was so freakin twisted. I'm like...guh...I loved this.
Isshin rocks my socks...the pervert.
Great story.
Isshin rocks my socks...the pervert.
Great story.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i.... can't.... believe this... incest has to be REEEAAALLY good to be hot to me ._. .... GREAT JOB IT WORKED XD
i think it helped that isshin did this out of revenge/annoyance and that it was more a lesson than just fucking his son whom he loves, i kinda can't see them being lovers..... but you kept their rivaling personalities intact XD that helped too, great job....
aaaaand it's 4 am, so if none of this made sense, i have a perfectly good explanation.... the easter bunny stole my toaster :/
i think it helped that isshin did this out of revenge/annoyance and that it was more a lesson than just fucking his son whom he loves, i kinda can't see them being lovers..... but you kept their rivaling personalities intact XD that helped too, great job....
aaaaand it's 4 am, so if none of this made sense, i have a perfectly good explanation.... the easter bunny stole my toaster :/
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that... was... HOT! i didnt think i'd want to read it because it was ichigo and ISSHIN!!! that was twisted. but i loved it. if a guy was ever like that with me... he would never leave my basement.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well it's surprising that this hasn't gotten a review yet, so I figured I'd pop the cherry. It was enjoyable, you have a good grasp of pacing. It didn't seem drawn out, and it also didn't seem short and forced. Well done.