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Seriously hot, great story, as well as a little humorous.
This type of pairing is my favorite but for some reason I
can not find many of this pairing.

This was perfect! i really like your metamorphaism and the stern dialouge....it's as if the words come to life and you hear the characters saying it in your head as someone would read a letter in a movie and its the person who wrote the letter voice that the viewer hears....hope you get alot of good reviews becuz you deserve them and the only way to describe your fanfiction is: Silky, powerful, a real piece of velvet.

this story is unbelieveable, you are truly talented but the first paragraph was not an attention grabber what really grabbed my attention was the second paragraph that says "the red cloak on his wall was his fixation" that really pulled me in and the story was on fire intil the end but you know mostly americans will read this and we have the attention span of a fly and will get bored quickly so make sure the first paragraph makes you wanna read more and more cuz from the second paragraph intil the end I wanted more and more and i can't wait intil the next chaper^.^