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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you left us with a cliffhanger! Now I have to wait for your next chapter to find out who Ichigo's dreamlover is! (Erm, just kidding - I think I can guess which heavily tattooed guy it is!)
Great and very fulfilling story with a lot of very funny situations. I simply love the idea of Renji with a computer and lots of guy-on-guy action! Maybe he should have been reading stories on AdultFanfiction?
Please solve everything for the two heroes.
Thanks so much for sharing!
Great and very fulfilling story with a lot of very funny situations. I simply love the idea of Renji with a computer and lots of guy-on-guy action! Maybe he should have been reading stories on AdultFanfiction?
Please solve everything for the two heroes.
Thanks so much for sharing!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i want more!! *__* can't wait for the real sex scenes <3
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I love it. Renji and Ichigo are so good together. Keep writing.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best BLEACH fanfictions I have ever read. Remember Detail is key, and your great at it!!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aniay want's more, aniay will cry if she don't get more ;_____;
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that's hot! *_* moar!! <3
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, you have to continue it. Can't wait to see what you've cooked up for the rest of this story. Kudos
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude! If there was a tv show like that aired on regular tv then I'd so watch it. And if it's like a soap or a drama then it would be amazing if I did watch it because I don't like shows like that... Besides that. Good job! I can't wait to find out how everything happens. ^.^
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i love it i LOVE IT
i want more of them even if i usualy prefer ichi/hitsu
i want more of them even if i usualy prefer ichi/hitsu
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this story so far. I love your characterization, particularly Renji!
In the 3rd chapter I noticed there were a few errors, nothing major just things like missing a letter off the end of a word or an added letter that shouldn’t be there. Maybe you could find a beta...?
It’s not a criticism, most likely just fast typing. I can’t fault the story ^_^ I hope you write more soon!
In the 3rd chapter I noticed there were a few errors, nothing major just things like missing a letter off the end of a word or an added letter that shouldn’t be there. Maybe you could find a beta...?
It’s not a criticism, most likely just fast typing. I can’t fault the story ^_^ I hope you write more soon!