rate_review Reviews

u got 2 writte more. ^^ i like it i like it i like it! its very tastful unlike most fan stories. good job!

(Couldn't be bothered to sign in) Where's the rest of it???? You can't leave it there!! That's cruel and unusual punishment! What happened between Renji and Ichigo??? You have to tell us. PLEASE!!!

Plz....countinue the story!!! I love it.

chapter six. i was SO mad at you. Dude if i was ichigo...and id realize it was all a dream or whatever, id like...go in a corner and cry. I'm still mad at you though, no, shut up i dont wanna hear it . That was the best sex scene ive read in a long ass while. i don't even LIKE bleach yaoi. I mean i love yaoi but not bleach yaoi. yet i LOVE your story. I LOVE IT. I'm gunna tie you down and make you write for me. Shut up and don't argue, i'll buy you stuff. But you have to write for me. =D sorry im just a seme type person. XD seriously though, i enjoy reading this fic a lot (although im not done yet) and im not saying you should make it your first priority cus im pretty sure you have a life outside a computer. But keep up the good work. or else...something bad will happen. really bad . O.O

finally chapter eight! i had to get up and eat.People yell at me cus i dont eat. It's just food, im not gunna die cus im not stuffing my face, jeez. so i had an apple while reading your story and almost died choking on it. You use too many big words.... >.> man, Renji's a manwhore. ohhh you touch my tralala. hahaha XDDDD What's with Ichigo? I knew he was crazy....him and his yelling...I wonder why people yell when they fight? doesn't that take up energy? see dammit you make me think. Good day!

HI-
I love this story and you are mean!!! horrible to leave it here!!! Could you stop with the angst soon please????
Slave

Sorry if I came off sounding rude. *scratches head, embarassed* I really didn't mean to. I know it's not just about sex and I'm glad you realize that. I really only wanted to know why your writing style took a turn to darkfic, instead of freeflowing humor... that's all. Please forgive my rudeness!!!

-Kai

Your writing is getting very intense, almost as if it took a complete 360 degrees. I can't say that I don't like it but you've gotten so... serious. Why the drastic change? I noticed this habit started developing almost 2 chapters ago. Yes, it's poetic and artsy but I REALLY liked your free-flowing style, your erotic usage of words from before. Oh well. Thank you for the update... it's been a while.

I like this story and I'm curious-what is the poem that you use at the beginning of the second chapter? Please let me know cause I just love it! You can send an email to lithiumwonderland@hotmail.com please! Awesome writing!

I think Renji and Ichigo are just a tad out of character. I don't really think Renji says ya that much. It's an interesting story, and although I can't imagine Ichigo reacting that way to that type of stress.... It was an alright read.