rate_review Reviews

This was a very good fic. It made me feel like crying at all the right parts. Very good job! :D

When I started reading this I got the impression that it would be a complete sob story of tragic love with an unhappy ending. But you have given RenxBya a shot at a loving and fulfilling future. I felt a little cheated out of a nice crying session, but I admit I think they deserve a nice future so your ending is actually OK. (Smiles happy)
I liked reading your story but I must admit that I skipped the lyrics, hope that's allright with you?
Loved the family version of Rukia and Ichigo with children. Nice touch!

PS from Bya_Ren community post -

^^ Just cuz I review there not meaning I can't review here too~

I never mentioned how you nailed Byakuya's speech, completely. Genius~ *throws confetti on you, Byakuya, and Renji* (Byakuya and Renji cuz they married ^^)

Nice ending ^^
Eh not quite nee ? i think u still had an epiloque...
Surely i hope something special than ^^
Keep ur nice work, two thumbs up for your work ^^

Have a nice day,
Setsuna

My dear, that was a wonderful story, and I coudl tell that you put a lot of time into it. Thanks for the explanations at the end, seeing as how I'm a fairly uncultured American female. Brightside is English, and she says a lot of things that make me go 0.o..... And she has to explain the jargon to me. I think I'm learning.

Renji's accent is Cockney, right? I loved it. See, in my American mind, I hear him speaking with a little bit of a Southern leer as opposed to Ichimaru's heavy Texas drawl. (Which he has...Even in Japanese. o.o;;; ) You did a beautiful job with this story, honey!

Yay for you!

Damn, this fanfiction is amazing x-X;;
And good God, oh-so-sexy. WITH ENGLISH. I love you <3
This is so well thought out... I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work =3

>.< *Grabs you and shakes you to almost-death* Dude, you had me staying up for 48 hours waiting for this chapter dammit. Yes it was so sad. I stayed awake all night refreshing aff.net page. And yey, Byakuya finally found him. And Zabimaru is returned to Renji, so I can't (and don't have to) hunt Byakuya-sama anymore. ^^ I wonder what chapter 6 gonna be about o.o.

PS. I KNEW Renji was a whore!

Renji: >.< No, you WANTED me to be a whore!

Me: ^w^

Wow, absolutely awesome!

Am looking forward to reading more of your well thought out, wonderfully written chapters!

Phaow... this was pretty damn awesome.
And you made Renji SCOTTISH! XD
I will forever think of him in Tartan <3
Amazing story. Keep up the good work~ Can't wait to see the next chapter =D