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June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I gave it all 5 +++'s because I liked your story. However, it was kind of annoying to see the "style='mso-spacerun:yes'>" code-error-thing many, many times throughout. It was also distracting to be constantly scrolling down since there were ~8 space margins in between paragraphs. Take those out and I think you'd cut the story lengtH in half, lol. Like I said previously though, I did like it!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The end totally surprised me! I was so busy wondering who she was marrying I didn't even THINK it was who it was. That was awesome! *claps*
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
did see that twist coming, good work
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, absoltely magnificent
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*lol* I love how you make it sound like she's cheating on her fiance with him, up until the last few paragraphs...teehee...
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My god! That was genious!
And, of course, who didn't love the robe?
And, of course, who didn't love the robe?
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it... The apparent mis-direction with "cheating" and it being "a bad idea for him to make her wedding dress"... Fantastic Job!!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one shot. I already adore this pairing but hooking them up in a non sweet way was very orginal. I aplaude your writing style I didn't who Hime was 'cheating' with her. Very sexy and well done.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and thank you AGAIN for this! I like it so much!