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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!
Gin is so BAD! And Renji is so COOL!
Look forward to reading more!
You are an AWESOME writer!
Keep up the great work!!!!!
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Gin is so BAD! And Renji is so COOL!
Look forward to reading more!
You are an AWESOME writer!
Keep up the great work!!!!!
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow - already 11 chapters! And I still can't get enough of it...O_O Wowie...*winks* Today's chapter really interested me a lot - Byakuya's anger was perfect and he got to be top, which is aaaaalways a good thing XD
Another thing I really appreciated was Ukitake's last sentence. Truly poetic it just...fits wonderfully, in my opinion.
Sorry if I'm not able to give some constructive and smart comments, but I just get too fangirlish when it comes to this story XD I hope you'll forgive me.
Good luck with every of your stories!
Yumi-chan
Another thing I really appreciated was Ukitake's last sentence. Truly poetic it just...fits wonderfully, in my opinion.
Sorry if I'm not able to give some constructive and smart comments, but I just get too fangirlish when it comes to this story XD I hope you'll forgive me.
Good luck with every of your stories!
Yumi-chan
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!
I love this chapter.
Oi, Gin is so kinky; it makes me all hot and sweaty.
But Renji and Byakuya are just extra yummy.
I love how you display their characteristics and all.
It is so satisfying. ^-^;
I can't wait till the next chapter, I want to see what naughty Gin does.
I love this chapter.
Oi, Gin is so kinky; it makes me all hot and sweaty.
But Renji and Byakuya are just extra yummy.
I love how you display their characteristics and all.
It is so satisfying. ^-^;
I can't wait till the next chapter, I want to see what naughty Gin does.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAH!!!
I was waiting for it. TRULY waiting for it! Byakuya's anger was just perfect and-...Oh gawd, how sick is Gin's mind? Obviously, I can't wait for the next chapter. REALLY-CAN'T-WAIT!
Oh, I'd just like to point out a little thing, if you don't mind...
"With a light bow, Gin bowed slightly and hopped out, landing on the next lower rooftop where he looked back up with a dangerous smirk, his voice carrying lightly over the nighttime breeze."
Isn't there a small repetition in the begging of the sentence? Other than that, I think it's perfect...*blushes* Sorry if I was wrong.
Good-luck with your cosplay-thingie!
Yumi-chan
I was waiting for it. TRULY waiting for it! Byakuya's anger was just perfect and-...Oh gawd, how sick is Gin's mind? Obviously, I can't wait for the next chapter. REALLY-CAN'T-WAIT!
Oh, I'd just like to point out a little thing, if you don't mind...
"With a light bow, Gin bowed slightly and hopped out, landing on the next lower rooftop where he looked back up with a dangerous smirk, his voice carrying lightly over the nighttime breeze."
Isn't there a small repetition in the begging of the sentence? Other than that, I think it's perfect...*blushes* Sorry if I was wrong.
Good-luck with your cosplay-thingie!
Yumi-chan
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lord.
Reading all of these chapters in a matter of two days could almost be called obsession.
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You're an absolutely fantastic writer, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
Renji was being so bad. He should be punished. v_v;
Reading all of these chapters in a matter of two days could almost be called obsession.
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You're an absolutely fantastic writer, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
Renji was being so bad. He should be punished. v_v;
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The bastard! *sobs* Poor Kuchiki-taichou!!! AH! UPDATE!!! >.<
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love this... absolutely love it. Every character's interplay is perfect... and of course it has Ichimaru Gin in it so that's a BIG plus...
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gomen for being late, but I had to sign in for university tests and such...*sighs*
Anyway, I liked both chapters! A lot!
I truly can't wait to see what's gonna happen when Byakuya and Renji will meet again! *pleading eyes*
Good luck
Yumi-chan
Anyway, I liked both chapters! A lot!
I truly can't wait to see what's gonna happen when Byakuya and Renji will meet again! *pleading eyes*
Good luck
Yumi-chan
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I HEART CHOOO!!!!
please keep writing, i really would love to see this finished
XD
please keep writing, i really would love to see this finished
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GYAAAAAH!!!
Wonderful as always, I LOVED IT!
Byakuya being top is one of the HOTTEST things usually spinning in my sick mind and you depicted him just GREAT!
Keep it up!
Yumi-chan
PS and don't call your stories "filthy rambling" or such, or I might come over to your place and bite you. XD
Wonderful as always, I LOVED IT!
Byakuya being top is one of the HOTTEST things usually spinning in my sick mind and you depicted him just GREAT!
Keep it up!
Yumi-chan
PS and don't call your stories "filthy rambling" or such, or I might come over to your place and bite you. XD