rate_review Reviews

really loved this^_^! liked particularly Ishida\'s characterization. i never really expected that this series would go beyond 2 parts. keep on sharing the IchiIshi love!

WOW! I love this story. What I love most about it is how every chapter is almost like a story within itself, and in the end it all comes together for one purpose... whether it\'d be smut or something else....XD. Ishida and Ichigo are hoooooot together!! ^^ I also like how you guys thought of different ideas and ways just for them to do it! Awesome! The only thing... Ichigo\'s hair is Orange. Aweesome story! I can\'t wait to read more! ^^

okay, so here it goes. i haven\'t actually read the playtime mini-series, but i only have internet for a few minutes before i get cut off... leaching wireless sucks ass. anyway, i read one of your snippets at the bottom of your 3rd story and i really wanted to review because bleach yaoi is rare and i love you for even writing it. thanks.
loki scott

o.o I love this story. Hell, I love how you did the Ichigo/Ishida stuff. XD Please, do write more.

Great job! This is the first yaoi story i\'ve ever read, and I honestly didn\'t think I would like it, but the way you two have written Ichigo\'s and Ishida\'s relationship is just so good. I think you have their dynamic down. Keep writing!

hmm... interesting... but i think i prefer ichigo/ishida more :P

Mmmm...yummy story. Sex laden and mildly angsty, can\'t beat that.

*drool* sugoi!! many <3s to the best bleach fic out there!!! :D Thanks!!

Damn, y\'all can write well. As far as constructive critism...there were a few gramatical errors...a couple of missing commas, periods instead of commas and a couple of odd sentence structures, but nothing majorly distracting. I\'d point them out, but as I said, they weren\'t majorly distracting...just the ex-English major in me noted them in passing.

*giggles* that was good stuff! i really liked it and i congradulate you, for this is one of the few REALLY good smut pieces i have read with good grammar. But i do have one question, is the word Shinigami spelled with one or two \"n\"s? You\'ve used it both ways a lot, and i\'d like to know. And i again thank you for the good grammar, because you have no idea how angry it makes me when people post something and you can barely understand it. I guess it\'s just one of the many weird things i am very anal about.....and one more thing.....Go Ishida-seme! yay!