rate_review Reviews

ANOTHER brilliant chapter..but does that mean that the relationship will be a three way one? Either way is fine, so I was just wondering ^^. I can\'t really think of any other constructive criticism since my brain is fried from reading such a marvelous lemon! Woow. That\'s a nice idea to let Kon have his own body, but kind of sounds like a disaster waiting to happen, I just hope it can have a good ending. Oh! Uryuu\'s eyes are like a dark sapphire and is hair is like a really dark blue. ^^ I love this story and I can\'t wait till I read more. I wonder what Orihime or the other females would think about it? Please continue ^^

Actually...two minutes can kill you....

Seriously, though. I really like this story! Your use of detail, expression, everything just seems to flow so natrually, even the inclusion of Kon (though, that would be...strange). It\'s amusing how Rukia actually *helped* with that...wicked little girl, isn\'t she. I look forward to your next and sadly last chapter :D

Hey guys! I\'d just like to say that from what i have read of yours (which is practically everything pertaining to Naruto and I\'m in the middle of the Bleach playtime mini series), I really must say that you capture the characters\' personalities excellently...I\'ve read a lot of yaoi, and some people really just dont have a feel for it, you know? Like they make Sasuke not seem like himself - but when I read your stories, I can truly imagine Sasuke and Naruto as themselves. You do a really good job of portraying them. Here is an example of what I mean: I was just reading poolside and the part where Ichigo says, \"Do you want to start in the shallow end like some 3 yr old brat?\" That is SO him, you know? And Ishida too...I honestly can say that I have no complaints aside from the occasional typo here and there. Great job and keep up the great work!

I like this story a lot...I think you dealt with Kon\'s character very well...his desire to be in a real living body is very nicely portrayed here...he\'s actually quite precious. Keep writing. This story is quite good.

Just one more chapter left? Waah! I want more!! ^_~

wow, you pulled it off: a threesome with Kon! And it didn\'t feel akward. It was just hilarious to read Ichigo\'s thoughts while Ishida and Kon were *ähm* busy pleasuring each other. Kon was awesome, kinda shy but soo needy. I guess you should really find him a nice body *supresses naughty thoughts*. I also like Ichigo\'s more emotional moments here. So PLEASE write more! By the way: first I thought you might forget Rukia in the end but you solved it perfectly! Hehe~

Was finally able to read all the chapters so far, (5). ~sigh~ What a great series of stories. My fav pairing in Bleach. I can\'t wait to read the next two, was it?, chapters and I\'ll be sorry to see it end. I really like your writing and am going to look up whatever else you have posted.

Thank you for taking the time to write... I know how much time it does take, even just one chapter, especially when you want the stories just so, (and I don\'t have a beta, so takes me a really long time ~laughs~). ^_^ Anyway, I gotcha on my recommended list. Something this yummy is a must read, for sure! ~BLE

Nice addition with Kon there. Be sure to get him a nice body! #>.<#

well, i must say, i think you should continue this playtime mini-series... one more and it\'ll be done!!! no way!!! that\'s not cool... lol, well, even if you do end this, please write MORE bleach yaoi (ichigo/ishida please), because this is some darn good stuff XD

suugoiiii!! *glomps* :D!!!! heart it!