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Reviews for Consolation Prize (of Victory)

By : blackfox1
  • From ANON - Neko on March 30, 2014
    I really liked 'Prize of Victory' but all in all, this feels like a way too long filler arc for me. Your writing style is great, there are no mistakes and you describe things very vividly. But the content just wasn't appealing to me.
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  • From ANON - Allie on November 17, 2013
    Wow. That brought about so many feels. Ugh, I can't even begin to fathom the multitude of emotions that this story brought out of me. I feel a bit drained. Very well plotted.
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  • From Aviary on August 07, 2013
    That was totally awesome! I loved catching up with Renji and Nel. They are so cute. You did so great writing this! I love it and I'm sorry haven't reviewed every chapter but I've loved every single one! Thank you and Nova for writing this bleach story I love it.
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  • From ANON - ennui demorte on August 02, 2013
    Love this story!! Renji & Nel are perfect together. I especially like Renji's wet dreams about Nel. And knowing about Ichigo & Rukia is great! Especially knowing the time frame that Price of Victory 2 is going to span, knowing that Ichigo & Rukia are together gives me ideas on what might trigger the Escapees proceeding with their rescue.

    Renji's inner world, with the sand and the meadow grass, is brilliant! Especially Zabimaru taking naps there, eating mangos.
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  • From Aviary on February 19, 2013
    I've just started your part of the gap between Prize of Victory 1 and 2. I can't wait to read the other chapters! You play a great Renji! I'm looking forward to finishing what you've written. Keep up the great work! You and Alexandra write so well! Thank you for all your hard work!

    -Avi
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  • From Scorpinac on January 21, 2013
    Okay, until I glanced over Kain's last review, I didn't even realize you'd lifted two manga only(until Bleach gets a "Final Act" treatment) characters for the ones attempting to grab Vindula, probably because they came and went so relatively quickly so far back. Kudos!
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  • From Scorpinac on January 21, 2013
    An excellent arc, my friend, excellent! And as to who wanted the Quincy weapons, was that Kisuke? Or is Kurotsuchi still alive? Ah, well, I'm sure I'll find out in POV2. Until next fic, then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on January 15, 2013
    Wow! Just Wow!! I managed to read all 11 chapters in one sitting and all I can say is amazing. I don't know how you and Nova have made me fall in love and care about characters I never would have before in combinations I never would have put together!! But you have, I Love Renji and Nel this was a wonderfully told story and I really hope I see more of them and your writing in the future! Well done and thank you for sharing the gift of your writing!


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  • From ANON - Kain on January 14, 2013
    To piggyback off of my last review, the names Luders and Asguiaro just sunk in as those 2 Quincy/Arrancar hybrids that have shown up in the latest arc lol. I can't believe i didn't immediately catch that, Very nice.
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 13, 2013
    Another excellent chapter, but this exchange really stood out to me and had me rolling:

    “Fine. Thanks for the advice.”

    “Whatever. It’s more of a warning.”

    “I’ll keep that in mind.”

    ‘Good.”

    “You’re stalling.”

    “I’m trying to come up with a decent story.”

    “Any luck?”

    “No. Fuck…”

    “Let me guess. She’s coming this way.”

    “Yeah.”

    “Been nice fighting with you.”

    “Likewise…”

    If only the other Arrancar were more like Grimmjow,starrk and Harribel. Those 3 at least treat the ones they have claimed with some dignity and even outright love in Grimmjow's place.

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  • From ANON - Kain on January 10, 2013
    Chapter 8: Brilliant as always and could the intruder perhaps be a member of the Vandenreich? That is if you or the main story author intend to bring them into this. Kudos to Renji for managing to save the day somewhat and show that he is smarter than people give him credit for. And this line about Nel had me cracking up,

    "tempest-in-a-D-cup"

    lol.

    chapter 9:....ouch.....ouches all around.The feels were crushed in this chapter lol.

    -applauds and waits for next update-
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 07, 2013
    Holy hell, the feels in this chapter.

    (applauds)

    Can't wait to see what comes next and sincerely hope you write more stories filling in the time skip gap.
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 04, 2013
    Nice double update. Not a whole lot to say other than i loved both chapters. You continue to impress and hot damn that sex scene was scalding hot although Renji almost screwed the pooch but it is nice to see him get his head on straight and start doing smart espionage. Liked the little back story you gave Nel and it will be interesting if Nnoitra ever catches wind of her survival and current form. I always felt when reading Prize of Victory that he sort of saw Rangiku as a replacement Nel. Especially given their similar...ahem assets and both being strong females. Loved the inclusion of Yumichika and Ggio by the way and it's sweet that they are trying to give Soi some small comforts.

    You are on a roll, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 03, 2013
    Nice, very nice start indeed. I greatly enjoyed Prize of Victory despite how soul crushingly depressing it could be at times, especially in regards to some of the less fortunate claimed individuals and the hinted despair of the larger population in soul society, so this story is most welcomed. Renji and Nel's interactions are just adorable and the sex scene was perfect. I have never been a fan of time-skips so i am very glad you are writing a story that fills in some of the gaps. Kudos for the video revelation that showed just how Ishida died and Nemu was claimed, and while i am still not too fond of Szayel(or quite a few of the other more cruel/dickish Arrancar) the video went a long way to somewhat endearing him to me. Liked how we finally got some info on just how much it kills Yuroichi to leave Soi Fon to her fate and speaking of which, is their any chance after you do this RenjixNel story that you will write others detailing what some of the other less read about claimed individuals did during the original story? It's just that Beyond Karin's little cliq of claimed people and a few others we still only have little tidbits here and there of how the greater population is dealing with being claimed and it was outright stated that when things first started their was a staggering number of rapes and murders and by the end of the first part of Prize of Victory we are told that some still suffer under their Arrancar masters even after a decade. As a stated before i greatly enjoyed the first part and i am sure i will enjoy this story as well, I am just very curious as to what the other less spotlighted characters are thinking and going through. We also never really got a followup to the whole "who is Ggio trying to court" sub plot and it was teased that it was Soi. Regardless of what route you take I intend on reading this to the end and I hope you did not take offense to anything i typed in this review.

    -waits patiently for update-
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  • From ANON - Tori on January 02, 2013
    Hi BlackFox!

    Hi ho hum I hope this finds you in wonderful spirits and I have to say I'm a big fan of your writing, but the one I'm a fan of Toshio/Halbei could you do something similar like your doing now, with approval of course from the NovaAlexandra. I felt that you carried the character with integrate consideration of the character and there growth. But I just felt that you captured the essense that was the character themseslves. *Humbling bows* please consider it.

    Tori
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