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Reviews for Bad Urahara!

By : whitetiger
  • From Raymy on March 09, 2013
    I swear I thought I've read this before. Sorry I didn't review, then, but since you did me the honour, I'm returning it. As this is your only Bleach story, I'll probably check out your Naruto ones, too.

    Yum, yum. Your story had the right effect on me. Lots of action that I was able to visualize easily from your descriptions. I liked a lot of your word choices, feeling a kinship, there. It's very reasonable that Ichigo would take control, and you gave an explanation for why that would be so to any doubters. I like seeing the young inexperienced teenager give the mature worldly man something unexpected and new. Who says you can't teach an old dog!
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 27, 2012
    Definitely delicious, entertaining, and well edited. The only problem I had - and it was minor - was that (since there's no indentation to denote paragraphs) the lack of spacing between paragraphs was slightly distracting. Not a big deal, just thought I'd mention it.
    Anyway.
    One of my favorite pairings. (Who am I kidding? It has Kisuke in it and you did quite well. Heheheh!)
    A quite entertaining take on just how Urahara's 'experiment' would be a...miscalculation, shall we say? ;) Love it.
    Thanks for writing and posting!
    May the words just flow,
    Cuzosu
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