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Reviews for Breath Apart

By : BookMaggot
  • From AriaDream on July 07, 2014
    Eeee, I love this and I definitely want to see more! :) Shunsui/Juushiro is my favorite pairing at the moment... well, aside from Shunsui/Starrk or a threesome with those guys. XD So hot.
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  • From Vyper on April 14, 2014
    Please continue this story! I so want to read what happens next! It is driving me mad!
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  • From ChocoChibi456 on October 01, 2013
    This is just so adorable X3 I can't wait to know what happens next... can I hope for a fast update or should I come back next year? =P
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 06, 2013
    This story is a perfect mix of despair and friendship and sorrow. Please update soon!
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  • From whitetiger on August 05, 2013
    Yeah!!! I have been waiting sooooo long for this chapter. I think you did well on representing Shunsui. In such a situation anyone would feel the vast array of emotions you described. Even someone as carefree as Shunsui would become emotional. I could easily picture him, all these feelings churning within him like a violent whirlpool, a slight frown on his face, the only outward appearance of emotion. The feelings he experienced in this chapter makes him more human, it makes his character more lovable.
    I pray for a speedy update, but will wait patiently none the less. :)
    Thank you for coming back to this story.
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  • From Raymy on February 11, 2013
    Don't tell me this is over. Don't tell me, please. *puts fingers in ears, hums very loudly*
    First impression. Gods. I love inner turmoil, misunderstandings, and the potential for growth. That's why this can't be over. You've covered the first two nicely, but all we're left with is potential. No actual growth. Oh, BTW, thanks for making Ukitake's eyes green. I'm in your camp. So, I want to know more about this stupid hollow and the drug Shunsui was on. But mostly, I want Shun to find out Ju's secret. Now, there's some turmoil. Would he think his friend is a sick puppy? (no pun intended) Or is he feeling that this was not the way he wanted to finally express his lust for his friend. Eh, eh? I know you have the answers lurking in that creative little head of yours.
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  • From whitetiger on December 27, 2012
    I really have enjoyed this story. Will there be more? Please don't leave it like this, with the two of them in so much pain.
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  • From ANON - ohyeah on November 13, 2012
    Ooooooh I would love to see where this is going. I can't wait for this one. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Roisin Ichimaru on August 29, 2012
    I really like this story! Are you going to do more with it? I really would like ta know what happens next ^-^
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  • From satterb on August 19, 2012
    I really like what you've written so far. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to more.
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