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Reviews for A Cupful of Heartache

By : wolfkin59
  • From ANON - hollow on May 20, 2013
    Nice start, hope you update soon. Looks like your brunet is getting possessive. Will is ussual relax nature snap. Kisuke is not easy prey.

    read you later
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  • From Raymy on February 02, 2013
    Kisuke in bed with Shunsui, not once, but twice! Yeah, so nothing's gonna happen for long time, yet, but it looks hopeful. Seems Kisuke returns some attachment feelings but keeps pulling back because he's still working out Yoruichi's death. I think he's making progress, though. Wanting to work in his lab is a good sign. I can't figure out what he was trying to do in there. Was Shun just paranoid and by knocking the vial out of Kis's hand, actually caused the fire? Would it have really blown up in his face?
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  • From Void-san on October 13, 2012
    This is just amazingly well-written, I actually joined AFF just so I could review(I didn't know if you could review stories or not if you weren't a member)
    You're awesome!
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  • From Raymy on October 08, 2012
    Chap 4: I like that Kis-kun is listening somewhat and responding a little to Shunsui. I'm enjoying the exchanges between them the acceptance of each other's presence. You take it slow, showing how difficult it is to come back from the edge, when others might have jumped to recovery too fast. My last review was August, so if that was the last update, I guess that explains why I had to read from the beginning again. But that's okay, I like it well enough to reread. FYI, the CAPTCHA words for this review are: alfo ogifirs. I sometimes get a kick out the silly nonsense I have to endure to share my thoughts.
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  • From Nakkinomiko on August 15, 2012
    I'm glad you were able to beat your computer into submission! Another fine chapter ...I nearly laughed out loud when Shunsui was pinned to the floor. You write these guys so well!
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  • From Raymy on August 15, 2012
    I've reviewed 'Convincing Kisuke' on Fanfiction but I've started to read more on AFF, now, so I'll review 'A Cupful of Heartache' here. I was disappointed to see no votes, only one review, but 300 hits. Sheesh! I think this site is full of lurkers. (I aught to know as I'm usually one of them) I put in a vote for this story and CK, too, because I know you like feedback. For some reason, I'm inclined to respond to your stories. I guess I appreciate your style at a gut level that urges me to respond. I think its hard for some people to get into the story when its only 2 chapters and slow to formulate. However, I think you do an excellent job of relaying the mood and back-story to get the reader invested. I think your writing is smooth and the ideas mesh. I know I want to read more. My mind is piqued as to what will come next. Please update frequently. ME NEED INPUT. ***Ahem, I'm addicted to fanfic's, especially Mature/Adult. Heh, heh.
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  • From Nakkinomiko on July 25, 2012
    Looking forward to more! :)
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