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Reviews for Ransom

By : Raicheru
  • From ANON - guest on July 19, 2013
    Fantastic story. Really enjoyed this version of Grimmjow and their interactions. You have a good balance of detail and pacing, so there is good description of what is going on and what's going on in Ichigo's head, but the story doesn't get bogged down. The smut is very hot and well done - also, thank you for keeping it realistic, that makes it so much better in my opinion. So happy to have found a well written BDSM story like this. It would be neat to read more about how their relationship would develop, if you choose to write more, although the ending is nice as it is.
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  • From bettytx on April 24, 2013
    Daaaaamn, girl! I've found quite a few good writers on aff & ff.net, but in all seriousness, you have got to be one of the most amazing writers I have ever seen! I barely decided to read this one after hesitating at the summary and the pairing - don't know about you, but when I see Ichigo, a kidnapping plot, and 'Rapefic' tagged altogether I have ALWAYS found a horribly violent(in a excessive, unnecessary way; he does have a rather violent nature at times and I have no problem with that)Grimmjow and it leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I can handle kinky and enjoy the authors create a dark side for a already pretty fucking dark character, but I think every 'bad guy' needs to have a bit of humanity in them. Anyone else think so?
    But that is a whole different discussion,hmmm?
    The point was: I was hesitant but read it anyways and holy fucking god was I glad I did! You are AMAZING at GrimmxIchi! I was sad when I finished 'Ransom' and was like "Damn it, this writer is awesome, but I don't see any longer fics!" Then I actually read your profile (yes, yes, so sloppy of me, I was just too excited to find I writer like you I didn't particularly care what random boring shit was on you profile when there might be more glorious stories waiting for me at the end of a smut-filled rainbow! Will you forgive me?) and officially came to the holy grail.
    I was sad to see only seven, spoilt reader that I am, but then I saw the word count. Disappointment melted in the spring of unhindered joy! 200k, 150k, 120k, 90k, 75k, 45k, and the shortest one: 9k.
    O.o
    Well, my next week is officially fully booked. I have never been so glad not to have a life; nothing to get in between me and gloriously long fics. I'm will wait and see if they hold up to the standard of your short fics, but I'm hopeful. I promise to review the ones I read on both aff and ff.net (we'll see if you can figure out which one is me. If you can't...your brain must be broken. You'll see why). You should feel honored as this is the first time that I have reviewed a story. Ever.
    Anyways, what I liked about the story was:
    1. Ichigo had originally been ashamed of his fetish(es) but had gotten over most of it - not counting embarrassment and shyness - by himself. He wasn't wallowing in self-disgust. Not that that is a bad thing in stories, but Ichigo...I can seem him doing that if he lost control of his hollow or something, but not over something that doesn't hurt him, or, more importantly, his loved ones.
    2. Grimmjow was HOT, but not in a super-dominate way, more of a I'd never seen a take like that on his personality. Sure, he like to tease and taunt Ichigo a lot (well, not all the time because Grimmjow's not the patient type, nor does he have much self restraint) but at the end of the day (or at the end of his orgasm) he's not a sex maniac or some sadistic super-pervert-rapist; he clearly had a much more genuine interest in Ichigo even if it seems to start off as mainly physical. Not really too sure with your little 'Grimmy's a possessive peeping tom/stalker/maybeit'snotjustsexforGrimm' hint. I'm dying for a parell/sequel/prequel for Gimm's POV while he's watching Ichigo, just to see what you would picture him thinking as he learned more about the hot redhead with a secret, in all their smuttyness ;)
    3. The smut was....well, smutty. In a wonderful, smutty way. But it didn't distract from the story and revealed a lot about the characters - especially Grimm, not to mention several moments that stray more toward smexed-up WAFF. I loved it all, whether you intended it to come off like that or not.
    4. My absolute favorite aspect (well, maybe not more favorite than how you portrayed the Grimm/Ichi dynamic) was how the two's relationship easily shifted from 'rapist/rapee' to something more along the lines of lovers (because fuck buddies don't take their partner into the bath and jack him off and then just snuggle with him, and boyfriends just feels...childish?) without a whole big awkward heartfelt confession scene. It's something that's appropriate at times (many times) but it wasn't something that would have added to the story. Actually, I could see it ruining the integrity of the story. A bad ending is just...bad. I can totally picture many, many awkward, hesitant moments between the two as they later try to figure out just what kind of relationship they're in, but the way you had them move to the next level was just perfect and totally seamless. A wonderful way to end the story, if I may say so myself.
    5. Ok, last one: You. Speak. English. No garbled sentences, no places where I'm wondering what the hell THAT was supposed to mean, no paragraphs were I'm just like "Fucking hell, can you find a more confusing way to write, because I sure can't!", no repetitive phrases, no excessive or lacing descriptions, and you clearly spent time going over and checking your work (if you didn't, color me impressed) and everything flowed really nicely without you even having to use page breaks (right? I don't remember any)! Spelling was good as far as I'm concerned. I don't really care too much about that, I'd be a hypocrite if I did. I can't spell shit; thank god for spell check. I've seen good basic plot with horrible writing, and I occasionally run across a bad plot with good writing, albeit less frequently, but among the ones that can manage both, you're perhaps the most amazing.
    So...after that ridicously long review, I hope you're positively vibrating with pride (Ooo, mind dove into the gutter)and keep on writing. I'm really glad to see that you've been active recently on ff.net, I hate finding a writer I love and then see that they last posted in 2007 XD You know the feeling?
    I'll be sending many, many dirty thoughts your way,
    bettytx
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  • From AiyokuSama on April 03, 2013
    This is an interesting and sexy story :) any chance of getting that "one more chapter"? I would love to know WHY Grimmi isn't in lock up with his boss as well as what's going to happen with the boy's relationship...if there actually is one.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 05, 2012
    i loved you on ff.net and i love you on here less restrictions hope to see more from you lol i have a request can you do a stark/ichi
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